What an adventurous writing, and daring on high levels of thought. Many would never attempt to put this kind of thought, or realization on paper--even for private notes; however, you have shown a tremendous bravery to share this, Dayvid. It is very fascinating to read. Your writing seems to be escalating to higher highs, and leaning to philosophical levels these days. I don't know if it is my perception or just that you have been releasing another side of your writing lately. Anyways, great reading adventure is had with this one. Thanks again for that. Enjoy creating, always....

You walk that line just like Johnny for the same reason. Patrick

mascara is sexy
and so is messy hair in the morning
(so I am told)
what color are them toe jewels?
succulent cranberry or tangerine
you offer such visuals...

Toe Dancing
Vickie

hold that line! enjoyed.

Fascinating Dayvid ~
Nice easy flow to this piece.
Blessings,
Christine

So u like mascara and painted nails, I guess I agree with the nails part but I would rather a nice bra and panties...they go better with my beard...Ed

Declaratively honest and thought-provoking; thank you, Dayvid. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Never stop moving.
Well composed and set.

I think when we stop moving, we become an empty shell.

Tis a man who knows himself and makes no bones about it.

Writing with an illusiveness that is pure, honest, and genuine, interesting piece....

Be always safe,
Karen

This rocks all get out! This is one of the most expressive poems I've ever seen you post of this style, Dayvid! Solidly stated and versed in real-time lingo! Keep 'em coming On a Line!

Love and sweet smelling shaving cream,
Sage

I wonder if she knows how hot you are for her. Very good write, Dayvid.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

lots to chew on here. you caught me off guard on another wave length. have to ponder much of this over night; but i like it. makes me think. great respect for freedom, not fake herd-mentality freedom; but REAL freedom of the pen.