Outstanding poetic interpretation of mythical proportions. Powerful. The imagery is sublime...

Lin

arousing, bewitching, enticing him
to enter her yoni gateway
to mysterious depths,
a sanguine surge of ancestral seas
baptizing him, on his lips

I think these are some of the best lines, sexy, the yoni gateway, mysterious depths of woman, sanguine surge of man, baptizing - religion. Of course sexual union is, well, to me, the closest we come to God, for does not God want us to be happy and companioned? We are in his image; thus God must have been lonely, and created us. I'm just rambling here. But yes, too, man in missionary position, way too religious for 90 percent of the population of women - wake up, men! serves you right that you must now satisfy or do without. oops, too much beer, maybe. But really, gene, I love this. It is mysterious, it is sheepish, it is anguished, it is religious, it is sacreligious, it is precient, it is wise, and it is sexy as hell. well, done, my favorite genie of whom I have yet to dream.

Sounds like Zeus to me mean Gene, as usual you're a word smith, cheers

WOW this is a wonderful poem, I enjoyed it
Have a great day
Ray { Not a Poet }

An outstanding piece Gene
most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you

A splendid offering Gene, it is always interesting to see which creative direction your thoughts take us to next, and you never dissapoint...

Carole~

Excellent work here Gene, one can only read and sift through the creation of your thoughts, there is so much more than the simplicity of the mind to your work here, we see the depth of your imagination and the wisdom of poetic expression...

truly great work...

Art Sun...

A great written piece Gene,take care

EDWIN

Wow!! Great story in this poem, loved that ending!

My goodness what a story..Gene this is outstanding...read it 3 times.
love,
Christine

your creative juices surfaced for the crafting of this work Gene --you blend the worlds, reality and mythology with a hand that folds silk and rice paper -- delicately -- I love this work -- it leaves me so satisfied for reading it -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Great imaginative poetry! I'll take two... for AM and PM - Bill

oh the sensual fantasy within hungers of darkness
calling out from your words with feverish urgency
and not to far from the reality of mortal women yawning under missionary states....shame on the man whom selfishly is stealing her passion which needs to be fueled
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie

As an old sailor I have some time long ago wake up besides a malevolent hag from the deep seas that turned nightmares into dreams and dreams into nightmares.
A twisted but genial poem grabbing the lust inside man's chest and pulling it raw, lascivious for all to see; no wonder a woman would say, "he never will be satisfied again"

Georg

Sexing the witch in that preordained dull and predick-tably lacking astride man above woman coital position which does absolutely nothing for Lilith like Sedna, (in Inuit mythology) does for Lilith with a salty length of fossilized carved whale penis in their immortal woman to woman intercourse. Sedna finds none of the men shown to her by her father good enough, (nor do I and my lesbian partners) and so she marries a dog. Her father is so angry at this that he throws her into the sea. My interpretation of night hag is her emasculation of intrepid, socio-path, deceptive men in that Lilith, no matter how deep her yoni reaches the sea's acquifer, this male character will never be able to fill her depths with his "unsatisfying" manhood, he will never be able to generate her orgasm, the metaphor, "satisfy her neap tide, where high water level is at its lowest and there is least difference between ebb and flow"...lesbian women give the best head of sea lettuce and feminist dictum prevails...in a rear position Dog Star...Perhaps the boring missionary position will encourage more women to bury the whale bone into the yoni of another female down on all fours, Gene? A delicious tale of sea cunning...anyone for cunnilingus?

Love,
Sage

Gene, wonderful flow from beginning to end, well done!


Cheers,
Dan

Hi Gene, You have mastered the craft with this one! That she-devil hypnotizes the man and he can never go back to "normal". Excellent... thank you for sharing...

In Spirit,
Bear

Years ago I went and heard Gloria Steinman talk. It was an interesting night, since she was supposed to be "The feminist" and yet she said she loved men and did not think women should become men haters like so many in the feminist movement seem to be. In "Night Hag" I see what she is talking about--the woman who calls the shots and burns the man destroying him in the process. AT least that's what I saw in th epoem. I imagine this 'night hag' had to be on top to controlling every aspect of life. Jeanne, from another life, used to say "men were easy." True.

VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Gene, love the title of this, and I have to tell you this is excellent from first line to last. I love your use of language.

a truly outstanding piece of poetry ...

See Gene, this is why I am always drawn to the ocean! I am always drawn to your poetry as well. I found this poem very alluring and extremely sensual..ummm....

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

The little vamp. What fun and you do it so cleverly too. She is both mysterious and deadly. If I were an evil woman, I'd be just like her. lol...chuckle, hug, J'nia

Gene,
It would have been easy to write this straight and banal, a temptation in itself, but you chose to craft it; it's not that the craft dominates at the expense of the theme, it's that they're blended seamlessly...this is as much about style as anything and style in abundance it has...it's just so well written - language choices, phrasing, structure - I'm jealous and I'm very happy for you.
Kudos!
John

The title intrigued me.. and then the poem left me speechless and that's not easy to do! Well done, Gene!

Myrna

Great writing, Gene; very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Goodness, you certainly set a tone with the first line gene.

A creepy engrossing write 2 B sure!
And your choice of Lilith, a female demon from Afro-Asiatic folklore (Semitic) that attacks children as the hag is interesting.
Was it intentional?

Now ...
"(another inept adam
who insists upon the missionary position)" Inept Adam?

Hmmmm .... U must B talking about the street names here for methylenedioxymethamphetamine (the sex drug ecstasy since yur writing about boning a demon) because I know that you can't be disparaging Christianity.

Notwithstanding, I still enjoy your poetic constructs and want to leave U with a little token of my appreciation.

Thirstily giving suck
On your poetic tit
I laugh and cry
And growl and sigh
At your enduring wit
I stand agape at what you think
And how you choose your words
And hope someday I might excel
With my poetic turds

A fabulous personification that lives and breaths - I especially love the succulent and appropriate descriptors and diction you have used to conjure the juices of this sea-mare. This tantalises the imagination and the senses. And your use of "positions" brings the graphic relationships fully to life in our mind's eye - her squatting on those compliant limbs evokes her semi-humanity while his missionary style fits the bill of yer average semi-human blokey admirably!! :))) (Sorry, couldn't resist!!) He may not be satisfied with mortal woman again, but... yep... perhaps she might have had her fill of mortal man!!! (Ouch...!!) Blimey... Hope her wanton spirit hasn't landed upon me here... I repent!!! Totally delightful mythological hubblebubbletoilandtrouble here, Gene. Kauldron Kate xx

What Eileen said, I can't think of a better one either...though that one about an Adam and their lack of positions clinched it for me...Ed

Gene,you outdid yourself with this gem!I wanted to pick a line, but love them all! Not one wasted word...Superb!

Love,
Eileen

"on his lips
the life restoring brine
of her sanctified self,..."

This is gorgeous writing, Gene - exactly what I've come to know of you. I love the ambiance, the mystery, the magic.

Well, now, once you've had the sea hag ... mere mortal women can't measure up! LOL Just be careful you don't get on her bad side, or she'll do more than kiss your lips with brine - she'll fill your lungs and take you to the watery deeps! Excellent, Gene, enjoyed reading this one.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.