Innocent Eyes (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 29, 2014

For wishes thought to turn back time
To hold you close and make you mine

Been there, done that... ...and have the scars to prove it. Love and best wishes to you, Carol.

xo Regis

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Reviewed on June 28, 2012

Awww, so touching Carolee, makes me want to give you a hug and a soft smile.
Beautiful expression here, and the exposure of a lionesse's heart. How sweet. ;-)

Hugs and soft smiles forever
dan

Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2012

My dear Lily, where do all these painful thoughts come from? Whomever this man is that hurt you I hope has many regrets. Yes, I am sure to lose someone as precious as you brings many regrets to him.

Well composed and thought out from your point of view.

I bow and tip my hat to you

Cyrano

Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2012

How very sad this young man missed the boat. From all I see you are a lovely young woman.

Edith

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 20, 2012

The lyrics are hauntingly beautiful. Though I'm not sure of the meaning, especially at the end.

Ron

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2012

Carol, Wow-a mainstream for all of us, but "if only" hadn't
happened you would not have written this heartening poem...
from the depths of your soul!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 20, 2012

'If Only' - truly very sad words and poem.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on June 20, 2012

Woulda. Coulda. Shoulda. Heart broken. Lessons learned. Put the learned lessons to good use. It is a shame the mistakes we make haunt us throughout our loves.

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2012

Not only the words "if only" are such a sad words, how many people have thought, have said, have screamed in despair, "if I could turn back the time".
Let us all think before we make our decisions, every second that passes by can never be turned back anymore.
Beautiful write Carolee and again good food for thought

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on June 20, 2012

Lily,
we should all choose the right then we would not wish to turn back time..the present would be our eden. I loved this write Lily.
Budd

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on June 19, 2012

Oh, my! You are such an angel. Where do you hide your wings? I don't want you to hurt!! Know you are loved!

Love ya!

Jane