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The Cottage
by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley → (All Poetry by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley)
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Suspense is the ink of the imagination... ~Lily of Lough Neagh~


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The eroding cottage was filled with imagined memories
boards creaking and cracking as she climbs the stairs
Stale smells of old pipe tobacco and sea air
permeate tattered drapes that hang in despair
wind swirling like a turbine picking at the thatched roof
where streaks of sunlight appear kissing the aged floor

 

Clouds stealing the sun and locking it behind dark forms
glancing occasionally over her shoulder while ascending upward
she questions her motives for coming here for the solitude
miles from anyone or anything for a story, for inspiration
after all her mind is vast, a veritable locker of thoughts and visions

 

Climbing winding stairs up to the widows’ walk
the railing gives way and sections drop to the floor below
her back to the wall her heart pounds in fear of the near fall
a low throaty laugh rises from the depths of purgatory
was this her imagination hard at play?

 

Opening the door to the widows’ walk, where Annabel had once tearfully walked
in search of her man sailing the seven seas, who never returned to her loving arms
opened a fissure in time emitting bright light that blinded the writer
hesitantly she reached into the light fingers prodding
swiftly as it came no one heard the gurgles of her screams

 

Captain we don’t have any clues, the sergeant remarked
an old fisherman found her twisted body on the rocks below
no other car tracks or footprints, just her car with a laptop inside
Suicide? No, not suicide just look under her
what’s etched into her back, I’ve never seen anything like it

 

Carolee Dennis-Woosley
April 21, 2013

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Cottage"
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2014
I like how you changed from past tense to present tense: that truly invited us into the moment happening. You have created a marvelously entriguing atmosphere in this, Lily. I enjoyed the coldness, the detail of wind and smell of creaking wood and tobacco. These lines hold my interest completely; your choice of words consistently engrossing and, as reviews below say: your leaving the etching to our wonder is a perfect finish! ~~ Diana

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on May 3, 2013
an amazing write Lily
truly enjoyed reading
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed on May 1, 2013
WOW. love the mystery. love the setting/theme. just great. enjoyed this much!!

Reviewed by Gail D (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2013
Wow this is absolutely great Carol, it makes me wonder what is on her back. I hope you write a follow up to this one.

Gail

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 23, 2013
Not only have you written an outstanding poem all of a woman's quite when her man does not return from the sea, you leave us with a mystery about what is “etched upon her back.” Now we will have to read the sequel.

Ron

Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2013
This is good but I wanna know what was on her back?

Mark

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on April 22, 2013
Suspense in the etching
magnificent an ending?
leaving us wanting more!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 22, 2013
A captivating tale, Carol. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2013
This was excellent, it makes me wonder what they saw. This lets the mind wander to many conclusions. What killed the writer and why, what was the message left.

Di

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2013
A perfectly written narrative poem Carol.
Building up the tension layer by layer with all little details
And leaving the audience in the end amazed and puzzled.

Perfectly done

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on April 21, 2013
One of your very Best story poems, Carol...I am guessing that the mystery at the end you leave to your readers. I'm guessing some sort of tattoo. Very descriptive and poignant. Very much enjoyed!

Love,

Deborah

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on April 21, 2013
~Lily~
Romantic story of a broken heart. Rich in details and mystery.
Etched into her back ~ the shape of a locket that once held her
love's picture.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on April 21, 2013
quite a romantic tale with the enduring question for others at the end
budd

Reviewed on April 21, 2013
I swear this will be on my mind forever! What was etched into her back?????? A name? A sign?

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 21, 2013
A story told is worth telling thrice. This is very good, Carol, very good indeed. Poem stories are most endeared to my heart and soul. This is a pure delight, strong images and places where the imagination can fly at will.

"Suicide? No, not suicide just look under her
what’s etched into her back, I’ve never seen anything like it"

There must be another one in the offering unless what is etched into her back is in this poem, and I can't find it.


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