It's been 20 short days (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

It's been 20 short days
by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley → (All Poetry by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley)
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How sad that others can judge so swiftly, but how happy the heart where a true friend stands ~Lily of Lough Neagh~

It’s been 20 short days Since he walked away And I’m to be strong As though nothing were grey Is a heart so short sighted That love can be short Are others so blind They forget true loves hurt If so they’ve forgotten True love takes more time I wasn’t merely smitten Not in lust it’s called prime But then you did tell me It was my entire fault Without knowing all I was at default So now more tears fall I lost two once best friends Because for them I am weak And I am out of my head True love is not fleeting It does not go away Never for sure In just 20 short days I wanted a friend But you took that from me You said others are funny So you then soon blocked me No worries old friends I can still be there for you My heart is compassion My loves always true But please do remember In 20 short days A heart must be hardened Not to feel any pain Carolee Dennis-Woosley May 6, 2014

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 7, 2014

Let me puzzled whether this is a recent occurrence of only 20 days or that's how long you have decided to mourn the loss. Or, it could be that the relationship lasted only 20 days like in an annulment because the marriage was consummated (quite words for a serious problem).

Don't worry, it's just me.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese

captures your feelings clearly ... hope your pain is short lived ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 6, 2014

Very moving and expressive; sad as I know only too well. Please don't give up on love, though. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,

xo Regis

Reviewed by Andy Turner

Gosh, you and me both. I thought I'd found Miss forever happy after, at Christmas, but, today I found out that it's not so. But, what the heck, I know there is a gooden, somewhere.

Chin up, smile. You're a cute babe, for certain sure.

Reviewed by audrine max

oh, love what have you done? another one you've sent in the perils of your arms. i'm sending you strength. 20 short days, too early for healing.

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Sometimes people must step out of the way but still "be there" in order to let one think on his or her own. What I do I do out of love.

Love ya!

Jane