Beatles yellow submarine (couldn't find an aquamarine submarine...)

Usually I writes what I likes,

Mostly scaring the reader, yikes,

Should before posting it, send it to the shredder,

But sometimes it sort of seems I do better…J



Who taught me to write like I does,

Hell I can’t even read let alone write,

Most of this stuff seems to be scuzz,

So you does read me (thanks),

And I wonder what’s all the buzz…J

 

Am I better to write while high,

While through the clouds I do fly,

You’d be surprised at what up there I’ve seen,

The air so much more clean,

Still way up there I’ve seen an aquamarine submarine…J

© ed J 1/29/08