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Let Me Off...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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This was a dream or a nightmare or...

If you can figure it out, have at it...e


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Spinning uncontrollably,

Bouncing off Saturn’s rings,

Was that an angel passing,

Had to be, it had white wings…

 

Just so much flotsam,

Spinning by, creating whirlpools,

Black holes swallowing planets,

I think I am going to puke up my family jewels…

 

Let me off this amusement ride,

This spinning planet I cannot abide,

I’m past the condition of caring,

I paid my two bits, now I got the runny sh**s…

 

Unfurl the sail, drop anchor to deliver the mail,

This planet does move through space like a snail,

Still spinning at a dizzying rate, I’m about to hurl without fail…

© ed ~ 11/11/08


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Reviewed on November 12, 2008
dyzzying or is it dyzziyng, once more around..... Bless you!

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Ed,

what a great poem. very good.

fun and flotsam (neat word)

Thank you, ~Donna.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Yea I have felt like this all too often myself lately so know what you mean.

fee

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Fascinates me how things seem to of sped up. For Ed however they have slowed down a tad LOL...
:) Ch'erie
PS Please don't hurl, it will fall off and come down under YURRRK

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Ed, Mom said to get off that s**t (anyways Edvard said you never share)

Pee Wee the Wise


Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Ed, Mom said to get off that s**t (anyways PeeWee said you never share)

Edvard the Elder


Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 12, 2008
Thank you for sharing this poem,hopefully by the time I finish writing this review that you are doing alright,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 11, 2008
Ed, I have it on good authority that the world is sick
and doesn't know what the hell it's doing or where it's
going--and we're stuck with it. Let's go crabbing. -gene.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 11, 2008
You may have had too much smokeage....Not a problem. Just hit the sack and things will be worse in the morning.

~W~

Reviewed by Blue Sleighty
Reviewed on November 11, 2008
Expressive write. Been a very strange day, Ed. Hope you are hanging better.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 11, 2008
Gee, ya have me half sick on all the spinning goin on...but it sure was a fun ride. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed on November 11, 2008
Hope you feel better, Ed ... I think the world is goin' 'round too fast for me, too. :(

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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