Sounds to me like you got Alice behind that Looking Glass, Scooby... Look out for the Walrus and the Carpenter; they'll probably both look like John Lennon! :)) xx
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2012
I'm laughing at Lily's comment, you are a character
Ed, a sweet man at that.
if that's your thing, then go for it, nothing wrong.with anything you said here. it's readable for me anyways, can relate well to it also. Been there done that. too.
Ed, this poem surely caught my attention but I am not yet sure what to make of it. Sometimes I can be very literal and it gets in the way of my understanding poetry. Sometimes that can be a very fun challenge, and I look forward to figuring it out. Be well, Kathy
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Ed, a sweet man at that.
Deborah
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Love ya!
Jane