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Heat In The Afternoon
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Heat In The Afternoon

The heat and dry of
Summer weather
brings you back
like that insufferable
Sunday afternoon when
the heat almost won
because poverty
didn't provide
a cooling fan in
our world of gotta' eat
All windows open
but no breeze since
that storm in April
Eating was unappetizing
reading impossible
sweat wets every page
We give in to create
our own heat wave
intensely incendiary
a hellava' lot more fun
than being stoic potatoes
baking in a merciless sun


F William Broome 2008


 

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 Reviews of "Heat In The Afternoon"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 31, 2008
a wonderfully written piece--love these lines:
the heat almost won
because poverty
didn't provide
a cooling fan in
our world of gotta' eat --wonderful

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
Great imagery reminds me of the house that I grew up in...tin roof, little if any insulation, no air conditioning that was a luxery few had, and only a screen over the open window and a small rotating fan that seemed to only blow hot air! Nights were miserable, the days we sought shade outside or would wade in the creek, and sometimes just sit there and allow the water to flow over our legs, fast food was a luxery that only happened very seldom, so it was cooked meals and no in the heat of the summer they just didn't taste as good as winter days...thank you my friend for taking me back to some uncomfortable, yet wonderful memories. Makes one stop and appreciate central heat/air and microwaves....a wonderful write filled with outstanding imagery. Enjoyed!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
This resonates with me, Bill. Love the last six lines. -gene.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
Sounds like things got sticky ;-) Excellent imagery. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
When that kind of heat strikes...the very will to smile seems sucked out of us...but we always survive to look back on them days as memories.

Fee

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
Such great imagery in this, Bill!

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2008
Great writing! Vivid imagery - my screen is sizzling.


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