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upon the axis of perfection
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Two Bay Area (CA) young men....18 yrs old... both high school graduates of just this last year .... have died in the recent battles in Iraq ...pray for all who are in harms way.......


upon the axis of perfection

the sun rose
rivers fell to the oceans
oceans fed the heavens
and on our day
before this day . . .


Her
Times tossed out of rhyme
Sight defined ~
The blitz around the corner,
Upright pedal rush.
Speed bump curb into the driveway
Wheels dumped in crash abandon
Five-steps in a two-step sprint to the front door.

Vibrations radiate~
The marathon up the stairs,
Jumbled sensations of enthusiasm.
Baying forever feedback,
Manic
mad
unmelodious beat.

Cold stepping out
From refrigerator door open,
Banging.
Winged kiss on the cheek,
Spoiled
Devil-eyed wink
"Hi mom."

Time
Passages
Life
Toss of the dice
Visions undermined~
The cold shuffling down
The body torn.
Life pools a red halo
Conquering the weightless dust .
"I’m cold. . . so cold . . ."
Winged kiss on the wind
I love you, mom.

I love you, mom,
Carried home.
Spoils of war
In her womb.

She shakes . . . dreams tossed
Out of time. Out of life.
A hand wakes her sleep.
". . . Its time to go."

and with
this day new
rivers fall into the oceans
oceans feed the heavens
and the sun will set . . . .


the sun rises

the sun sets
Our sons die
With our rising.


jeanne rene 2/04



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 Reviews of "upon the axis of perfection"
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
Jeanne ,
powerful and excellent message in this poem
Happy Easter
peg

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on April 9, 2004
excellent poem, Jeanne!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on April 9, 2004
Excruciating..but as hard as it is to bear..these young men go for a purpose..one in which they believe in. If they die..they die still believing.
Those that come home...come home wanting to go back to finish what they believe in.
Heart touching and heart breaking write Jeanne..Lisa

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2004
jeanne ... life can disorient us when we feel the loss of our young men at war. So hard to deal with this. You express it and reveal your soul at the same time. It hurts to have this happen, and we know it will not stop ... only pause. Happy Easter. Bill Murray
P.S. You might understAnd my poem "They March To War" on the main page. We are in a very distrubing period in Iraq


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