Suzie
I just love your poetry all ways...upside down, and inside out, all ways...
You carve these senryu gems straight from your wonderful and magnaminous heart...
Love and Hugs..:D
Peter

Great work!
Chanti

Oh I like this. So deep, so good. Like a circle going on and on.
Thanks for this!
My best,Gloria

Suzie,

Hmmmmmm! You got me thinking. I was thinking of the North and South Poles. Very thought provoking.

Thoughts to ponder!!

Love Tinka

So true! Gives us things to ponder! WEl done, Suzie!

eT

This makes the reader think, Suzie. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Or they become a tornado...very good poem.

Susie,

Sounds like the clouds approaching from the West...a cool Senryu, I enjoyed. Can be taken on several different levels.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Nice one Suzie and so right you are, when I went to the North Pole on an ice breaker as a young man, I seriously almost beieved I would see a candy cane red and white striped pole sticking out of the ice, disillusiioned at first but then I thought well perhaps it is hidden to the naked eye and can only be seen by little fat men in red suits or huge animals that fly. Anyway ranting on here but my point is your poem is true no matter where we travel it is just a starting point to another place. Great ru.

Felix