I love the wrought iron spindle shape and the web within it. This delicate poem tugs at me and draws me towards the intricate beauty of the words spun by the author -the weaver of natural and unforgetable treasures.
~Butch
Drippingly enticing. Love the way you play with word consonance. -- Jeff
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2006
Taylor this is so thought provoking and well expressed poetry.... I like this one a lot..
Love,
Joselyn
Reviewed by Lonely Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2006
Thank you very much of the comment on my poem. I did not expected any comments and haven't noticed the comment box here. There are a lot of works of yours here. May be in this long weekend I can have good read of it all.
This poem gives vivid images through wonderful vocabulary. Good works it really speaks to the heart.
Ah Taylor, I love that quote from Tolstoy...that's exactly how love should be spread and exactly how it should stick to all unsuspecting victims. Your poem is the icing on the web. Precious!
there is beauty and danger within nature's tapestry ... if one's imagination is captured the beauty of its design, its lure is to be cherished ... if one becomes physically ensnared in its web, for the purposes of consumption, its beauty is inconsequential ... a beautiful and thought provoking poem you're weaved, Taylor ...
Wonderful write, love the imagery...a spiders web is a fascinating thing...just as our life, you never know when that unexpected visitor may come in that will either make us stronger or so often they tear down. Again I must say that this is a wonderful write.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Beautiful Poetry Taylor
I look at myself as that loose tread
On a tapestry, wondering should I pull it?
or stept back and awe the finished product.
thanks for sharing
oh my this is good...a lovely piece of work and at the same time...deeply profound...this is exceptional. I see you and I were on the same wave length this week as far as tapestries are concerned....lol.
The web of mystery spins the mind into a vortex of dreams. It traps the the Muse and she pens the maze to make life more interesting with adventure. You are awesome when you treat us to your world of nature Taylor. I really admire this pen. It's a keeper as is our friendship.
Love,
Susan
Tolstoy caught far more than he bargained for in his webs.
There is certainly a limited duration in all things corporeal, beautifully portrayed in the sinister spiders web. Not all things, in this life, are as beautiful, or as safe, as they seem at first glance.
The spiders web represents so much metaphorically, and certainly gives us an insight into much more than we bargain for at times. Sometimes getting too close, to what appears as beauty, can ensnare one in something they never bargained for.
Sp. labyrinth
I like this new direction you're going in ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
That is very good, indeed. You caught me in the web right away... and we never let go. 'Tis an outstanding bit of writing... in an area that makes me feel inadequate. A master's touch!
- Bill
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~Butch
Regis
Love,
Joselyn
This poem gives vivid images through wonderful vocabulary. Good works it really speaks to the heart.
God Bless
Lena
words are so true
Love & Light,
Joseph
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
The tenacious lure
a
transient captor
of
elusive dream
and
captor's quest.
Breathtaking! Loved it! Love Panda :)
Peace. Joyce Hale
I look at myself as that loose tread
On a tapestry, wondering should I pull it?
or stept back and awe the finished product.
thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
William
" Oh what a tangled web we weave..... "
I believe Richard has captured the mood of the moment below..
You are heading in a new direction as this well constructed and beautiful poem suggests..
Love
Peter
love, Myrna
"Temporary Tapestry" is a flower sprinkled with grace and wonders sparkling dews of beauty through its petals of love.
I salute You, Sublime Poet.
Long healthy creative life through a blissful living.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Well done sis!!
Love Tinka
let me say it again, wow!
I don't know what else to say...it's beautiful...extremely beautiful! I'm in awe and envious!
Susan
Eileen
Love,
Susan
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Tolstoy caught far more than he bargained for in his webs.
There is certainly a limited duration in all things corporeal, beautifully portrayed in the sinister spiders web. Not all things, in this life, are as beautiful, or as safe, as they seem at first glance.
The spiders web represents so much metaphorically, and certainly gives us an insight into much more than we bargain for at times. Sometimes getting too close, to what appears as beauty, can ensnare one in something they never bargained for.
Sp. labyrinth
I like this new direction you're going in ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
- Bill