Powerful lines. "For lightning does not know its power..." Lightning is not the only force that doesn't seem to know its own power. The personification of lightning seems to give it its rightful place of honor. Enjoyed.
I always had a feeling of trepedation whenever storm clouds moved in and thunder was heard. Some times I was caught outside as the lightning danced around me wondering if I would be the next attraction to draw its attention and feel its power. Splendid write.
BRILLIANT!! I was totally captivated by this from line one through to the end - didn't want it to stop and your high-energy take on Lightning makes me think of it with an entirely new perspective. I really got excited with both its concept and potential! Very well done, Ron. I'm applauding! TY Kate xx
excellent poem, Ron ... if mankind can learn to harness his own potential as well as the natural powers surrounding him, we can certainly reach the stars ...
Not only is this a great poem, Ron, it also was a wonderful lesson. I love the thunder and the lightning but before reading this I knew little to nothing of its science. Thanks for the shot to the old gray matter.
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Sherry
Thanks for this informative write.
Blessings,
Joseph
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Sherry
Love,
Eileen
I could feel every word I was reading rambling deep down....awesome!!
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