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Soggy
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
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A repost for the times...

To say I'm all wet,
Would be a lie.
Sky ceiling low,
And river high.

Not a dry spot to be found,
Though I've searched and searched.
Looking for shelter from the dread,
For a dry place to lay my head.

Soaked flour and soggy bread,
Gloppy, gooey, mildewed, dead.
Slimy, slippery, yucky too,
Tonight, there'll be no hot food for you.

Slush and slosh, too soft ground,
Mud and pestilence, all around.
Water in everything, everywhere,
But not a drop to drink.

Slimy, putrid, foul, and stink.
Do not wade, and do not drink.
Water, wash these sins away.
Filthy water go away.

Come, a sunny day.

RWH: 11/14/98

Poems of the Week - 1998

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 Reviews of "Soggy"
Reviewed by Tina Clark
Reviewed on September 6, 2005
Ron this one so fits the situation and the description is on the mark. You did a great job, well penned! I think we are all holding our breath for the Gulf Coast and waiting "Come, a sunny day."

God Bless
Huggles
Tina

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
A most à propos and timely offering, Ron. Thank you. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
Powerful sad..sickening imagery...well penned Ron!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
very appropiate repost, Ron ... good rhyme and meter and fits the situation well ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2005
Excellent write!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on September 3, 2005
This seems like a very accurate description. It really captures the sensation of what it must be like to be entrenched in New Orleans this week. Not only is there not a drop to drink, but no way to wash one's hair. ~ Sara

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 3, 2005
Oh my Ron! This is heartwrenching when you've watched it come to life, as it has for a week now! Superb capture,even though it causes more water to flow... from the eyes.

etw

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 3, 2005
This is a most timely offering, Ron. It is a very sad time for us all and a devastation by nature the likes of which we have not known in our country in our lifetime. I hope the evacuation is swift, though it pains me to say goodnight to New Orleans. Very good job on this, Ron!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 3, 2005
A very appropriate posting Ron, though I wish it were not...Ed


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