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Franklin Street Pier
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I don't know if Franklin Street Pier ever
existed. The idea for this poem just
popped into my head.


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 Franklin Street Pier


I was here, at the Franklin Street Pier,
when they tore that mother down.
Looked up and down the boardwalk,
and all I saw was frown.

Great granddad was here, Franklin Street Pier,
that very good year,
when they built the pier,
from the finest old-growth oak.

There was no peer, Franklin Street Pier,
"She'll last forever." They hawked.
"Have no fear... at least 500 year,
of that we have no doubt."

I thought with a tear, Franklin Street Pier,
of the day's dad and I fished in good cheer,
and I caught the shark of the year,
and won a great prize.

Of summers here, Franklin Street Pier,
where we swam in water so clear,
with no riptides to fear,
in the surf and the sun.

Build sand castles here, Franklin Street Pier,
and gathered seashells for fun.
Bonfires we built to sear hotdogs,
and gather around when the day was done.

In my teenage year, Franklin Street Pier,
lost my virginity after some beer,
under the pier, shielded from the sun,
but not from the fun.

The ocean grew near, Franklin Street Pier,
and ripped at your structure year-by-year.
Until I hear, talk, oh so painfully clear,
that you cannot be repaired like before.

I cried for you dear, Franklin Street Pier,
but you're no longer here,
while the sea and surf have no peer,
and the boardwalk is doomed to be next.

The handwriting is clear,
the ocean's rise is eminently near,
And the Franklin Street Pier,
will be followed by all of the rest.

Copyright 2013 © Ronald W. Hull

7/30/13

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 Reviews of "Franklin Street Pier"
Reviewed by Lakshmi Sharma
Reviewed on September 2, 2013
Nice poem

Reviewed on August 14, 2013
Many old landmarks have been demolished in my hometown. Yes, there are more than a few franklin st. piers in several locations!! Well penned Ron.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 10, 2013
Nicely told, Ron.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on August 9, 2013
Good enough for
"Grimm's Fairy Tales"
Ron, well done

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 5, 2013
well penned Ron
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Mor Inchrory
Reviewed on August 5, 2013
Ah! that old Franklin Street Pier it is no more
They tore its wooden structure from the shore
To let more ships on that Hudson river’s flow.
and left Sunday’s New Yorker’s, nowhere to go.

Reviewed by Lowell Eaton
Reviewed on August 5, 2013
This is a beautifully well-thought-out piece, filled with images you can taste. There is a real sense of place, even though the actual site may only be a metaphor for something larger, sadder, and more ominous. Very nicely done!

Reviewed on August 4, 2013
well done!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on August 4, 2013
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on August 3, 2013
Ah, the imaginations of a pier and it's 24/7 life that only proves there's joy for anyone willing to let it happen.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 3, 2013
Pure poetry that creates an image the reader feels is his.

Reviewed by Regis Schilken
Reviewed on August 3, 2013
By God, you're good. I love the rhyme of The Franklin Street Pier.
You, indeed, are a gifted man. I hope you have plans for publishing your work. You owe it to the rest of us.

Reviewed on August 3, 2013
The memories of mankind........Nothing lasts forever except the sweet memories until.......

Love ya!

Jane


Reviewed by Lark Pogue
Reviewed on August 3, 2013
Wow, Ron. I really liked this. Invites visions of growing up on the Gulf coast, and at the same time is wonderfully metaphoric of life.
L

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on August 3, 2013
Love this massive bite of nostalgia!
There was a wonderful old Victorian pier in Brighton, England - where I grew up. It regularly featured in movies and dramas over the years. Sadly, that one too has fallen into the sea. It was such a widely loved landmark that it was all across the news and many people (including me) cried for its loss.
Rx

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 3, 2013
Yes, as Jerry said this could be a great life's metaphor but thinking about ANY pier that I have known this is a great write...all the piers in NJ, well most of the very old ones that were built of mere wood have fallen into the sea & memories of them only seen on old postcards...this write makes great memories come alive and whether or not Franklin Street Pier existed or not, so many others did exist and have the same memories you did invoke with regard this one...e

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on August 3, 2013
This could be a fantastic metaphor of our life span, but you have written a very touching poem about a pier that probably has it peers across the once great land. Loved it.


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