Ronald...your head is amazing. I enjoyed every line and the education too. This could be applied in so many different ways....dimensional poetry at its best.
Poor thing. He's conditioned by his own instincts to react the same way every time. You've written a paen to free will.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2003
Oh, my, Ronald.. This is a most effective 'message poem', simply written, deeply felt.. like the fables that gently but unmistakenly teach the kind of truth we sometimes shy away from.. I love the purity of your rhymes and rhythm.. In truth, I got quite immersed. Great read! katy xox.
oh my!!! I like poetry that tells about the things in our daily lives lol...poor little bird! I had a cockateil, that did that too...broke her wing 3 times I think before i adopted her...the first 2 times she was so busy fornicating that she fell off the perch and broke it twice...then the window thing...she was a mess, her name was Pretty Girl and she was anything else but! lol my friend gave her to me,and I kept her for yrs...she was wonderful, flightless and super affectionate...got along with my lab, ferret, and hamster....laid 69 eggs in one yr when she started eating table food...lol..oh i ramble..ty for this memory...I love animals
hugs...Anita
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
I enjoyed this more than you know :)
Thank You,
Emilie
great picture
great poem
Tarek
hugs...Anita
WONDER POEM
your sliding glass door.
Great write Ron.
~Nikki~
The pic reminded me of my poem "My Little Birdy"
Love Tinak