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Ancient performance.......
by Karen Palumbo → (All Poetry by Karen Palumbo)
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Ancient performance........

 

A beautiful day to take a stroll,
walking on sand so wet and cool.
Leaving a trail of footprints behind,
vanishing with each pristine, circling pool.

A welcomed chill on such a hot day,
to appease the body right down to the core.
With each inhale a subtle hint of salt,
as if breathing in all that came before.

Best time of all is late afternoon,
when pelicans and dolphins make their rounds.
An ancient performance repeated many times,
each exposed magical step, wealth abounds.

From time immortal through each passing century,
such perfect creatures mastering their skill.
Mesmerizing, fascinating and uncontaminated,
pelicans and dolphins sharing at will.

Hovering high above in search of food,
pelicans swirling amongst the clouds.
Tucking their wings in a single bound,
diving down as if layered within shrouds.

Dolphins dance above and below,
their presence known along the shore.
A splendor to gaze upon, such iridescent sheen,
as they glide past gracefully searching for more.

Seagulls outline the seashore boundary,
extending out as far as the eyes can see.
Oh the lull of ocean waves,
yet so much activity within the sea.

Gracefully and spiritually it all began,
and just as suddenly it all comes to an end.
Tranquility returns as day turns to night,
yet somewhere they lurk beyond the next bend.

A beautiful day to take a stroll,
walking on sand so wet and cool.
Leaving a trail of footprints behind,
vanishing with each pristine, circling pool.
 

 

 

Written by:
Karen Palumbo
Photography by:
Robert Palumbo
6/24/2009 © All rights reserved

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Ancient performance......."
Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on January 16, 2010
Absolutely splendid poetry Karen! I needed to read this poem today!
Thank you for sharing and caring. Please tell Robert Fantastic picture!
May the Lord continue to bless you both!


Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed by Joyce White
Reviewed on September 15, 2009
Love this. Joyce

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2009
Magnificent poetry.
Tammy

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
Simple cadences and sonorous sentences adrift in vivid imagery... adroit co-mingling of enduring features of the sea with the ephemeral touch at the end, intriguing juxtapositions and sensitive handling of a sensitive subject. Wonderfully wrought.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 1, 2009
YOUR IMAGERY IS JUST WONDERFUL...WITH GREAT PHRASES AND RHYME, YOU PAINT AN AWESOME PICTURE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Dixie Dawn Michelle (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2009
What a beautiful walk, its lovely just lovely. And I adore the title!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 10, 2009
I enjoyed walking with you . I could see all that was happening with the great viusals you wrote about!...M

Reviewed by Susan Smith
Reviewed on June 28, 2009
You transported me to another world and experience, which is so fleeting: "Leaving a trail of footprints behind,
vanishing with each pristine, circling pool."

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on June 27, 2009
Hi Karen,one of the joys of coming to the den is reading your wonderful and beautiful poems :-).They are just heavenly to read and it always makes me feel good.Take care Karen.

EDWIN

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on June 27, 2009
"Best time of all is late afternoon,
when pelicans and dolphins make their rounds.
An ancient performance repeated many times,
each exposed magical step, wealth abounds."

SUCH beautiful imagery in this poem, I really really love it. Nature and animals/sea animals, etc, are some of my favorite things to read about, and this is a top quality poem. Blessings, Michelle

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 27, 2009
Thanks for taking me on your stroll! You always bring the sights and sounds alive with your poetry.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on June 27, 2009
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Susan Beck
Reviewed on June 26, 2009
Beautiful imagery, wonderful use of language... I could almost feel the salt mist on my face. Makes me crave the salt air of the gulf :)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 26, 2009
Yes, Karen, and it does not matter the shore, east or west, north or south...the sea is still the sea everywhere one goes...ed

Reviewed by Christine Boyce
Reviewed on June 26, 2009
I like your circling refrain-the beginning coming back to be the end.
And that is some refreshing imagery to go with your very beautiful picture.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 26, 2009
A reveling in glorious nature and also a hint of sadness for the future-like those footprints which disappear with the incoming tide?
Beautifully written, Karen...

Lin

Reviewed on June 26, 2009
super nice verse Karen and a joy to read, cheers

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on June 26, 2009
Envious poetry. . . .
Strolling on the beach
I'll never forget that first school of dolphins I met.
Doug

Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on June 26, 2009
I love living by the sea and seeing the animals in their natural habitat. Your poem paints a lovely picture. Your friend, Kathy

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
ah...love dolphins...your poem comes alive with such peace and beauty.

Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Karen, Your beautiful poem takes me to this lovely place of inspiration! Wonderful Poem! Exquisite Visuals!
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Karen,
Sustained, well conceived images and fine choice of language make this poem a joy to read, a celebration of the natural as we so often see and delight in in your work.
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
You definately got my love of the sea and shore stirred Karen and I love the repitition of the last verse. the ocean and the sea always lure my sea going spirit.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
ABSOLUTLY BREATH TAKING KAREN, LOVE HOLLY

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
A Beautiful Day To Take Stroll,.e. My Average Stroll Is Round Building..

Most People Just Don't Know How Lucky They Are Karen...

Enlightening---Keep Em Comen...

Your Friend TRASK...

Reviewed by Donelle Knudsen
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Karen, this poem spirited me away from a busy day in front of the computer. Thank you for these beautiful sights and "sounds". All the Best, Donelle

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Magnificent Karen! I love the mood it generates, the pic is beautiful
and your descriptions, superb!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Alan Cook
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Nice poem. If I'm not mistaken, the picture is of the Palos Verdes Peninsula. I live in Palos Verdes. My house is just to the left of the picture.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Great write, Lady J

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Beautiful, beautiful imagery, Karen.

Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Truly magnificent imagery, Karen; you took me along as you described the scene! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~

As always, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
A lovely poem; especially like the last stanza.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Beautiful Karen. I coujld vividly see all the things you described. Well done.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Karen,
I like how you're able to give a new and fresh perspective of the ocean; a place you love and write about often. This poem relaxes the reader. The best part about the ocean is that if we build on its edge, it will take back what belonged to it. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Not my Mallorca beachs, but you have described it well...although, there aren't no pelicans but decorating car's roofs seagulls!

Georg



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