Pollyanna wanted a cracker to edit the chaotic bold print declaring the world gone insane. Black on white pools of day old cracker carpet bomb and redact a fresh layer of yesterday’s hopelessness. The patient Cheshire sits and grins as fat Pollyanna sits and shits, a day late and a cracker short, eyes closed to tomorrow.
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Reviews of "Pollyanna"
Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2007
Rusty --
"A day late and a cracker short" "fresh layer of yesterday's hopelessness" great lines for a funky poet.
Damn. . . shoulda, coulda, woulda. . . had carpet bombed elsewhere had I known the headliners where warning me of my demise. . .
thoughts from "Pollyanna"
Sorry it took me so long to comment on this one. . .but I have a million excuses! LOL!
Hope all is well at your end of the cage!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy!
Hmm, you've penned a thought provoking write my friend. I think we all feel as though the world has gone insane, sometimes a bit hopeless, and that chaos is devouring society...maybe Pollyanna has the right idea...creative approach to a look at the devastating events that are occurring around our world today!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Reviewed by Missy Cross (Reader)
Reviewed on August 30, 2007
Rusty, this is a real mind-teaser... a wickedly pointed funhouse write. Love it!
For the reasons I describe in this book, the world-wide suffering, death and extinction of humanity is very likely to occur, unless nonviolent and democratically determined radical and revolutionary personal and societal actions and changes are taken
"A day late and a cracker short" "fresh layer of yesterday's hopelessness" great lines for a funky poet.
Kathy
thoughts from "Pollyanna"
Sorry it took me so long to comment on this one. . .but I have a million excuses! LOL!
Hope all is well at your end of the cage!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy!
Blessings,
Joyce B.