Bejeweled Battle (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

I am not the only one can write dark well!! This is short but strangely, very powerful. You are a wonderful writer!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on July 20, 2006

Graphic wake up call.
Well done Eileen...
Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on July 19, 2006

If your name were Grace, ya wouldn't, be any more amazing!!!!
ROCK_Salt!! very powerful!

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Amidst the travail, the pain and agony........will arise The Jewel of Mankind................you ALWAYS have a perfect delivery, Lady E!

Love, rhonda

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

War makes us realize those things we hold precious are mere material things when our freedom, health and individuality are at stake. You give us the duty of looking at war and material resources as realistically as we should.
Susan

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Most powerful offering Eileen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

A strong, powerful and concise piece Eileen that speaks vividly. Panda :)

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Outstanding write Eileen...this has become the scene of our fading lives...hope and pray for peace.

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

A masterpiece and great timing
Thanks for sharing
Love and peace

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

This planet is groaning with fever and rancor.

Something profound is unfolding. I feel it now more than I ever have in my life. It is a strange feeling, exhilaration and tentativeness.

An excellent Title and construct dear one!

Richard

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

much power in these words, Eileen. some of life's realities are harder to accept than others. Dawn

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Powerful and moving! A great write,
love, B&R

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Bold, in your face Truth here, Eileen! Heartbreaking reality here; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Eileen,

Spot on. Excellent, heartbreaking, truthful reality...well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by ronald genise

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Sadly the treasures of the greatest beauties most often is the cause of war

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

this is a powerful description, Eileen...I like how you incorporated beauty and its destruction within the concept of war

Susan

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Such a deep insight and concern over situations of war. People on war zones live like this on daily basis. GBQ

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Eileen

You paint the picture as it is...the best way
And it is true...these are very dangerous and foreboding times that we are living in..
The one true consolation however, is that we are getting closer to the Second Coming of Jesus Christ..
I love that word Bejewelled !

God Bless
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Hell has been suppying weapons of war since time began, started out with that damned snake. Will continue until . . .

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Tragic, isn't it? Your poem chills the soul with its intensity. Well done!

Myrna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 18, 2006

Quite chilling, Tiger Lily - and one has to truly wonder these violent war-filled days if such a horrific event could be on the horizon.