There should be a disclaimer at the beginning of this poem, "NOT TO BE READ WHILE HIGH, may cause violently stuttering reactions." Now, now, I will, will, be stuttering, stuttering all night, night long, long...peace, Ed & & Rufuz
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Robert
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2004
This was great! Much more creative than Andy just repeating that one line over and over to you for 7 days straight! The scary part is that I love it no matter what he does:) If you are ever interested in submitting it to a children's magazine, let me know at my website, www.writewhimsy.com :) I would love to use it for the print magazine.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2004
Karla,
I’m still cracking up at all the neddle naddle noo’s. Great way to end the evening and get some neddle naddle snooze’s. Thanks for your kind neddle naddle review’s.
Best of luck to you and yours,
Thomas
Reviewed by Elvis Fuzzley (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2004
I could identify with this so much. Just when you think you have outfoxed those bees, there they are. I will remember never to say needle naddle noo and never ever turn my back on those bees.
This is a great poetic song.
Elvis Fuzzley
The little bear that loves to read!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2004
Brilliant I was just praying for you had no intention of coming on the den, as it is 00:30, and WOW am I glad this is so funny a masterpiece, I'm cherishing this, you have exceeded everything I expected.
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This was way too cute...
God BLess
Michelle
Thanks for the giggle!!
I guess Andy will need a "Double" bigtime hehehehe!!
Love Tinka
There is a definitive uniqueness to all of your most talented writes - a joy to read...
Robert
I’m still cracking up at all the neddle naddle noo’s. Great way to end the evening and get some neddle naddle snooze’s. Thanks for your kind neddle naddle review’s.
Best of luck to you and yours,
Thomas
This is a great poetic song.
Elvis Fuzzley
The little bear that loves to read!
Am I grining
Love your friend in England....xxxx
good write
john+
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What Goes Round It Comes Around And, It Goes Abound Right In Your(There)Death Children,Loss Of Home,Car, Etc= $$$Wallet$$$!!
Your Friend, TRASK
bravo!
This is a delight, and I'd say you showed him!HA!!!
Take that Andy;-)
Bet that will cure Winnie The Pooh of his hunny fix! LOL Poor Pooh Bear...right in the bloomin' arse, too! OW! PAIN LINES! LOL
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D Fun write! LOL Enjoyed!
Now I see he should have also asked you for 'Bee Language' Lessons, too!