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Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Cold
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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They don't know who they're messin' with. :-)


Poem Artwork

Spinning words
Shooting poems out of my spinnerets
Silken strands
Of thought woven into a sticky home

Flies of doubt
Disturb my rest, buzzing around my head
Annoying
Teasing, tormenting the poet I am

Die, fly, die!!!!
I trap each one and envenomate them
And save them
To snack on in a moment of pity

That's the way
To get rid of dreamkillers and critics  :-)

(C) Copy written, July 14, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Revenge Is A Dish Best Served Cold"
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 16, 2004
" Vengeance is mine says the Lord !! I will repay !! "

Love

Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 15, 2004
You go Karla, tellitwhileilisten. Been missing you. < < <HUGS>> your friend in AR Mikii

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Revenge Is Mine Sayeth Karla,i.e. Watch Out For Those Back Stabers,Critics You Let Steal Your DREAM's !!

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
LOL! this was great and I hope I never get on your bad side!

Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Karla this was great
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Dear Storm Goddess Spider Woman Poetess,

You are cordially invited to join BUG, if you can turn your trapping of flys into SPLAT trapping of nasty humans. Thanks, Mr. Piddles

Great Poem, other than the fly part. We in BUG feel flies are much nicer than dreamkillers and critics!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
I'm not sure if this was meant to elicit a smile, but it did. I like the pity snack idea... great job.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Now aint that the truth! Great poem, Karla. Dream on.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
No comment byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!


Geeeeeeeeeez KARLAAAAAAAAAA!!!

No ;love


Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Revenge is best if never served at all...(my first personal quote, wow, feel honored do ya? LOL!) but it is the truth, but this revenge of a spider to a fly, well, not so bad, as it is Natures way of continuance...Life goes on...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Hon...I guess I have to agree with Dawn Richerson
for a 2nd time today. This matches MY mood, too.

A great piece of work, Karla.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Wouldn't do for anyone that has arachniphobia to see this poem/graphic...alas! there are pests in all forms and with all kinds of legs. You go tell'em all about it in a great diplomatic way! I like your finesse'.
Susan

Reviewed on July 14, 2004
(((Karla)))

First lightning, now spiders...your muse is nothing short of incredible! Makes me glad that I am NOT a fly! LOL Powerful, excellent write; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Dear Karla,

Wow, this is powerful my friend,
excellent write.

Warm hugs your friend in SA
Elga

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
oh yeah. this one suits my mood today, Karla. great write!


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