Midway (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 11, 2004

Karla
I'll pass, i fell of the bed from a earthquake the other day, the real thing was bad enough dont need to feel like I am in the middle of one LOL
GOd BLess
Michelle~

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

Karla,

Great rhythm - great and even flow - sensational, my friend!!

Robert

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

(((Karla)))

I love the rides myself, but I know my limits. You won't catch ME going on rides like the one featured in the picture...URRRRRRRRRRRRRPPPPPPP~ that, or I would pass out (remember me on the "Twister"??)! Still, am looking forward to spending the day at the fair tomorrow; can't think of a better person to spend it with than YOU! You make life at the fair a BLAST!

Wonderful write; thanks for the memory jog! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

You'll never catch me in one of those rides. Better be a chicken and alive than a brave and dead.

Interesting write, Karla!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

I've been to six flags, is it kinda like that. Enjoy yourselves.

Stay off the sickerlisers..lol

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

Great pen Karla. Brings back memories of growing up on a fair circuit. I used to stand by rides like these waiting on the cash to fall LOL.

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

Very good. Brings back memories of childhood, wanting to do it all. Now as an adult, seeing it all is enough! Have fun.
Dave

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

Excellent poem....have fun,fun,fun!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

Great Poem,Karla! I like to watch too!
I cannot take anymore of those scary
rides either! lol! I like your
attitude!
Love,
Becca

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on October 10, 2004

I know of those rides too, I like them alot, from the ground, watching...
The six flags up here in NJ is building a new roller coaster of some sort, supposed to go from 0-150 miles per hour in a span of 3 seconds, then from 150 to 0 in less time! What makes that fun, leaving your stomach and food in another place, only to catch up when you don't want it back? Enjoy your visit, pick the nice slow rides, like the merry go round and the little boats with bells or the choo choo with the whistle...LOL, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

Ah... laughing very loudly. Been there, done that! This is very good. I don't know if we slow down, or the rides speed up, but we all get there somehow. I enjoyed reading this.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

LOL perfection in creation!

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

Wonderful poem! I really enjoyed it! Hope you have a great time...

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

those rides are VERY scary. My sister used to make me go on them with her.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

I like my insides Inside, too, Karla!!

Hope you two Texas Twinks have a wonderful wonderful time at the fair.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

You are better safe than sorry Karla...grin
Better to play the safe game....at a safe distance..
Peter

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

HA HA!!!!!!!!!! You and me both girlfriend! My insides don't look as GOOD on the outside! Funny write!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

So true Karla
the more years I put on
the more chicken I get
like i don't dare to dive in the pool anymore
not even jump
I walk down the ladder .....lol
i don't need excitement i wants some fun
without the excitement

William ......Peace & Love

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

Fair Park is calling. Have fun!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

Karla you have me grinning and chuckling! I'm so happy
for you and Karen! I know you're excited about it, and will
have a great time! I'm keeping it all in prayer too;-)!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 9, 2004

LOL
i am a coward myself
love the way you expressed this......funny girl!!!
great style....made me smile.......higher than a mile!!
oooooooops.......don't look down!
anita ;)