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Mind Trip
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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For Eileen Waldron's "Ocean Without the 'E'" Challenge. I hope I did it proud. :)


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"Mind Trip"

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I find I miss
a particular sound
of a nautical kind:
and should it float
in on tropical winds,
it will carry my thoughts
far, far away
to warm, sunny days and
bright, bright sands against an
indigo gulf,
whilst soothing dactylion
stroll across my body...
So, ship!  Blow your 
stack and grant my wish of
an instant vacation,
a nostalgic,
important hiatus,
if only in my mind...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 


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Reviewed on October 17, 2005
(((Karla)))

You not only MET the challenge, you exceeded it BAR NONE! BRAVA; take a bow, O Poet!! :D

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Still on Cruise Control Mode, eh??? *Grins* (Next cruise I go WITH YOU!!!!! LOL And it'd BETTER be to ALASKA! LOL)

Reviewed on October 16, 2005
This is wonderful Karla, an excellent response to the challenge!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 16, 2005
We all need an 'Instant Vacation,' now and then, Karla - and this is a wonderful challenge entry.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 16, 2005
Definatley in the contention for Eileens challenge great wrtie
Felix

Reviewed on October 16, 2005
Most beautiful poem for Eileen's challenge. I wish I could witte this
Your brother abdi-noor

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
Looks hard
I'll Sit this one out
but I enjoyed your write
Very creative and challinging
maybe next time.

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
Excellent challenge poem. This was not easy and you aced it, Karla!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
Goes with the sound of the wind around a lighthouse, too.
Enjoyed reading this. Well done.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
A lovely getaway trip Karla!

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
thanks for letting us come along for the ride, Karla. love what you did with this.... soothing dactylion especially. Dawn

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
A wonderful trip!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
Wow! You really did the challenge proud! Great poem and I especially like this mind getaway, I do it often;-)Thanks for the fantastic response Karla!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
Most excellent...well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 15, 2005
I can feel the yearning in your soul, Karla. I hope you can fill the ache. Amour et paix. Ton ami de la C-B, Canada.

Regis


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