AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Debashish Haar, iLeanne Bright Cloudman, iRoger Vizi, iR.E.E.S Blogs Linda Smith, Publisher, iBryon Smith, iFrank Whyte, iMargot Dillard, iM. R. Mathias, iLloydene Hill, iFERIAL Haque, i

  Home > Humor > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 3,370 Titles
· 56,897 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Dec, 2001

Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Jump Start
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook


Poem Artwork

The condition of my muse
has gone critical:
her pulse ssst tttutt ttters and
stammm mmmers to a stop -
flatline.
The only hope for viability
is in the electric jump start
of a defibrillator -
or constant encouragement
(possibly both).

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Jump Start"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2005
Your muse is still very active :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 15, 2005
Oh you got it BAD girl........lol!!

Hope Karen's "shock" treatment helped!!

Love Tinks

Reviewed on November 15, 2005
one, two, three...CLEAR!! *shock* LOL

excellent poetry; sometimes our muse DOES need a good jumpstart once in a while! very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
Walmart now sells something similar to a defibrillator, but for cars, only $35 bucks too...maybe that will work...LOL! Ed

Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
Karla, this is a good one even if you think your your muse has gone critical. It hasn't. Just look around you everywhere, everything through touch, taste, smell, sight or sound. Inspiration can be found. You haven't flatlines yet.

Best wishes.
Patty

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
hahaha this is fantastic. Wish my muse thought of it!;-)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
hear the beat of our thunderous applause? may it keep you off of poet's life support for life and beyond. Dawn

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
My muse is on a flat line right now. needs more than a jump start
thnaks for sharing, Karla
love and peace

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
Keep on keeping on. There will be poetry all ready ingesting in your sub-conscience.. Let it flooooow...

Reviewed on November 14, 2005
This is great Karla
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by White Dove left (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
Boy, do I hear ya!!!!.. Maybe you were reading my mind, lol...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
well seems to me she must have kicked over and is running smooth again. Well done Karla.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
Ah, goody! Signs of life returning, I see! You had me worried there for a moment, Karla... thought someone was gonna have to go in with the mouth-to-mouth resus, inflating your poetic lungs with a bit of Thesaurus!! :)) But, the old spirit waxes lyrical again, I'm glad to see, and the life-blood of rhyme and reason is flowing again. Thought you was takin a well-earned break and feeding your Muse grapes or somethin... mind you, she could get used to that, so glad to see you've put her back to work! Now put that poetic Porsche into second gear and watch her go! Chocks away, Karla! Onwards and upwards.... LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
It happens to all of us, so don't give a care.

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
Lady K,

1...2...3...clear....ZAP! How's that? I think we have a pulse...yes...there's ink in that pen yet!

Peace and (((HUGS)))

B

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
Get out your old greeting cards and magazines. Pictures, sayings, statements, anything that catches your mind will catch ours. They will literally jump start your heart. It takes time for the mind to visualize rich, mental pictures. Write on, Karla! There is plenty to write about, practical to boot!

Sage

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2005
Dear Karla,

Sometimes the muse needs time alone
to rejuvenate. Then it returns to us,
playfully once again.

Love & Light,
Joseph


New Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Popular Poetry (Humor)
  1.  If I Could Be A Super Hero
  2.  Little Folk, Cousins Make A Pit Stop
  3.  Fried Chicken
  4.  Like Ducks in Paper Trousers
  5.  An Adventurous Reinterpretation of Mid
  6.  Milkman's letter
  7.  Laughing As I Flee...
  8.  Amazing Grapes
  9.  Newfangled Things
  10.  A Salt and Batter
  11.  A Writer Named Ron
  12.  Ode to Spamophobia
  13.  Porky Pig And Daffy Duck
  14.  My First Heart Attack
  15.  The Last Second
  16.  Bawdy Stories And A Game Of Bridge
  17.  Houston Greats
  18.  Hound Dog
  19.  AThree Year Old
  20.  Burst Forth
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part V by Jay Dubya

Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part V Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part V is humorous adult literature featuring adult content and language. The work satirizes and spoofs thirteen classic tales from U.S. and British literature, a  
Member BookAds

Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part V by Jay Dubya

Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part V Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part V is humorous adult literature featuring adult content and language. The work satirizes and spoofs thirteen classic tales from U.S. and British literature, a  
Member BookAds

Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part II by Jay Dubya

Thirteen Sick Tasteless Classics, Part II is adult literature featuring adult language and situations that satirizes thirteen famous novellas and short stories. It is Jay Dubya's sixteenth ebook.  
Member BookAds