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Septcouplet: The Bolton Twist
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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sleeping in a dark, secluded
corner of a poet's brain
is a muse
suddenly a noise piques her
interest; a delicious
smell twitches her nose

she comes awake
for goodness sakes

alert now, she searches for
the disturbance that
interrupted her dreams
it was only her pet
fumblingstumblingstubbing a toe
cursing while turning on the computer

it's three o'clock
methinks she's crocked

silently, the muse hops down the
stairs one-by-one-by-one (12 in all)
on bunny slippered feet
goes into the living room where
she sees her pet blinking
stupidly at a blank screen

"why won't words come
i must be dumb"

the muse rolls marbled eyes
in frustration
she's been through this before
nearly every night
her pet can't sleep so she
makes sure no one else will, either

and so, they write
throughout the night

it's a poet's right to be a
little mad
to get up at all hours when
the words strike
it's too bad, however, that
the muse has to suffer

from lack of sleep
price of fame, steep

the only thing the muse hopes
is that her pet will
remember her when she is a
celebrated author
and that she'll be able to take
a long overdue vacation

the poem, done
the best, this one

suddenly, a bolton twist of lightning
zaps the transformer right outside
the window
!the power goes out!  !!the computer
explodes!! ... and it's back
to the beginning, in the dark

maybe next time
there'll be more rhyme*

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
 ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
*hee hee *grins*

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 Reviews of "Septcouplet: The Bolton Twist"
Reviewed by Kathy Kubik
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Love this one!!!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Aren't you the clever one!;-) Fantastic work Karla! you really are into this form. I like it too, Jerry gave us a wonderful style to work with.You have it down pat! Superb work! Kudo's!

Eileen^

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
You have found your form, Lady, and you are taking on the Master like the Young Turk. What a stunning invention that it has so inspired a writer to FIRE in this way!! Kudos to you BOTH!! Touche!! LOL K xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Hey yeah, sleep is over rated. I love this. So enjoyable. Had me smiling all the way.
Better bolt-on a new lightning proof transformer.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
You outdid yourself here!!

J E R R Y she is gettin G O O D so W A T C H I T !!

You Rock Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Karla, you are too much!! This is fabulous! I love it! Witty and a terrific septcouplet to boot!! Or should I say a terrific septcouplet to Bolton! Great write!

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
I love it. It is so cute and readable. My muse is a caffiene junky, she has no choice because of the hours I keep. Coffee is the only thing that keeps her awake.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Karla,

You're really good at these. Love that pic also.

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on February 7, 2006
Your certainly getting the hang of these, almost as if Jerry designed it just for you...love that last stanza.

Paul;-)

Reviewed on February 6, 2006
Amazing! impressive and brilliant, can hardly wait to see the next one!
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
Your storm series is growing and building like a thunder storm on the horizon, stronger and stronger/

Felix

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
One of your best Sis. Karla... rhyme or no, I see why you call yourself "Storm Spinner!"

blessin's and ((hug-spinning)) to you,
cynth'ya

Reviewed on February 6, 2006
You never cease to amaze me with your creativity. Well-done, Karla!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
Very cute and clever, Karla. You are getting good at these septcouplets!! This format seems close to perfect for the storywriter/poet.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on February 6, 2006
Excekkent Karla keep em coming
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Walker Jackson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
Karla I do hope your dream comes true. We all need an enchanting vacation afforded by a best seller. Your muse is quite interesting. Red beans and ricely

Reviewed on February 6, 2006
(((Karla)))

You are getting so good at what you do. This possesses a certain charm that I find exhillerating, and the humor is clearly evident in your carefully chosen words. Your poetry has reached a new realm, and I am in awe of your expanding talents as a writer! BRAVA!! Take a bow!!

LOL at Jerry's review; you've learned from the BEST! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

P.S.: I LUV that pic!! :) The StormSpinner strikes (get it?? *Grins*) again!! :D

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
I agree with Jerry !
You are really in the groove with these septcouplet gems Karla, Great Storm Spinner !
You gotta love this magical line " suddenly, a bolton twist of lightning " !!!
Jerry will be rocking in the aisles !
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 6, 2006
If the glove don't fit, you gotta acquit . . . Oh, that's something else . . . er . . . You are getting too damn good here, Karla. This form fits you like a glo . . . Oops, yew-no-whot-I-mean.


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