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Awakening
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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S M I L E ! :) I'm fine. REALLY.

Passed my CDL written permit test. Now, on to learning how to drive a school bus (and how not to let it drive me). Thanks for the prayers! Please, please, keep them coming.


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I take my wakening slowly, wanting
to revel in the moment of now,
before the announcement of the day
rising in the East;
before life mounts me and rides me down
miles of crooked road;
before madness wreaks havoc on my
attitude and mood;
before commiting suicide by
getting out of bed ...
I look into the heavens, thanking
God for this time,
this peaceful time of serenity
before I screw up.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
 


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Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2006
Dear Karla,

Every day is a clean slate and a blessing. Search for the good and beauty in everything! Bless You.

P.S. So glad to hear you passed your test!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2006
As always, you are a riot, loved the poem.
You are a brave one, driving a school bus. I loved children too but to be the captive driver, I am not that brave. Strength and ear plugs be with you.
Rebecca

Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Congrats Karla, I am so happy for you, you are an amazing example of courage, and perseverance, write on girl, you are in my thoughts and prayers
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Congratulations! Keep going, or driving... lovely write,
love and hugs, B&R

Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Good on you, Karla; congrats on passing the test! May you pass the rest of them and show the world what you are made of! You will make it, I have complete faith in you!

Cute graphics, and wonderful write; again, congrats!

(((HUGS))) and much love (and always in my prayers), your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Think positive.

You can't cross a sea by merely staring into the water.
~Rabindranath Tagore, 1913 Nobel laureate for literature

Congratulations, too!!!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Yes... have to say I know COMPLETELY where you're coming from here, Karla... driving makes me feel that way, too!! But just imagine the JOY of being King Of The Road, out and about ALL the time and ferrying the harbingers of new life and vision and of all our new tomorrows in your bus! Now THAT should be fun! You'll do fine and the freedoms to be enjoyed with it immense. Go you... literally!! But after another snooze and a cup of coffee, perhaps! :)) LOL K xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Congratz....thank goodness I don't need to do this AGAIN..lol!!

You will make it because you are A twinKweeeenie!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
Love the intense expression of gratitude for the "small blessing" of a peaceful moment before engaging the world's chaos. It's true that pain lives in these lines but so does hope. Wonderful poem:-)
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
It isn't the school bus CDL....it's the kids that get on the school bus. Maybe in the great state of Texas they have them under control. How hot are you all out there?
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
Yes those first few moments of the day are precious arn't they? :-).........you driving a school bus.......ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Just kidding :-)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
Rufuz & I knew you would pass, hell, if I could pass the CDL/A in NJ you could certainly pass that part of it...The driving part is like driving a car, a large one and corners are a place to take a bit wider, but you will get it as well...keep pluggin' along...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
Karla

You are a born winner..
I am keeping you on the prayer boards..

Love and Prayers

Peter
PS Hurricane Chris has been downgraded to a Tropical Depression !
Hallelujah !!!!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
You didn't screw up - You Passed! (We knew you would.)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
I agree with Richard. You are a fighter and with God on your side you will get through this trial. So happy you passed the written test!Keeping you in prayer! Excellent poem!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 3, 2006
Dear Karla ...
Life is filled with twists and turns, and unsolvable mysteries. I know one thing for sure ... Christ loves us dearly, and hears and answers prayer as He see's fit.

I am so proud to hear that you have ensuing employment. You go girl! Congratulations!

Great write, filled with the Yin and Yang of real living.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg


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