Gonna Make You SWEAT! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 20, 2006

could almost cook an egg of this poem ;)

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on August 20, 2006

This pen reflects the heat that's smothering Texas right now down to the last bead of sweat.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on August 20, 2006

A hot write!
Love and Peace, B&R

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 20, 2006

Some people would wish to be the heat itself. Wonderful humor

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

Now this is hot, between the word images and the visual format this one catches eye and heart in a second.

Fee

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

You must live in Texas, LOL!! When it gets hot and humid, there is no place that compares to Texas. I think you have live there your whole life not to want to move somewhere else. For all of the great riches that Texas possesses, her fertile soils, expansive oil fields, warm hearted people, clean beautiful cities and warm sandy beaches, I could just not ever get past the weather there. Of course, I have been a desert rat my whole life so I am a weather whimp to be sure. I hope it all cools down for you so that romantic encounters to be the only thing making you sweat. *wink* ~ LOL
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

Karla

A fiery and passionate write in splendid metaphor

Peter

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

A fierce rush of pure fire. Makes one SWEAT indeed!
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Gloria Buono

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

"Gonna Make You SWEAT!" is hot prose and makes me sweat with laughter. This is truly an amazing and unusual perspective -- never thought perspiring could be an inspiration. I'm SWEATING! My best, Gloria

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

this short little poem packed a punch. WOW, steamy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

Now that is HOT....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice!! Behind the knees also gets me. Oh to be in Spain again... must drag out another pome from me dusty travel bag... thanks for the reminder!! Ticklish!! :)) LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

okay the heat has finally gotten to your finer parts;-) Excellent poem!...I hear weather reports on Texas and I cringe...Has to end soon, hang in their twins!
love
Eileen

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

I have to say too...you go girl! I love this!

Myrna

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

I know this Heat and I hate it!!! Great description, Karla!

Susan

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

Ya go girl..

Xxx dove

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

Goodness dear Karla ...

I believe that you added a bit of spice to this sobering write. You artist you!

Stand Strong!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 19, 2006

(((Karla)))

Wow! You just upped the heat index about a thousand degrees! excellent, passionate write! daaaaaaaaaaang! LOL very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, karen lynn. :D

i need a collllllllld shower now...*grins*