c r u i s i n g on the rag ged edge of disaster, a fly bent on annoying me; c g i n r i c l 'round my head, buzzing buzzzzzzzzzzzzzzy secrets only flies know into my ear - I don't speak fly, but it won't misinterpret the hand when i !! SLAP !! that bugger!
this poem's got me all abuzz about the winged fiends flittering about in my kitchen just now. I like to trap them between the window and the screen. cruel, I know. Dawn
Girl I got dizzy,glad I don't have relatives who are insects (although we all have kinfolk that bug the daylights out of us sometimes!) Smile!
blessin's and love and (((hugs)))
cynth'ya
"Ouch! Woman, have you considered my wife, my young ones...I can't believe you would snuff out my life 'cause I'm trying to whisper something in your ear. What about love, eh? Can't you love a fly? Geez, humans! Besides, my wee wife is pregnant...again! That's what I've been trying to tell you..."
Okay, it's just my sense of humor spilling out...loved your poem...could even see the fly buzzing round your head. :)
I love the way that you paint the scenario so graphically with the 'circling' circle and jagged and bent words!! I'm not kidding...there was a buzzing in my ear!
A humorous look at the world and life through my eyes.
Follow the author and his wife, as they travel the world …. several times over.
Laugh at their funny stories, self-inflicted crazy events, strange observations, wacky zoo facts and snippets
A humorous look at the world and life through my eyes.
Follow the author and his wife, as they travel the world …. several times over.
Laugh at their funny stories, self-inflicted crazy events, strange observations, wacky zoo facts and snippets
The Wholly Book of Doo-Doo-Rot-on-Me is adult satirical humor featuring adult language and adult content, and the work is a parody of the Old Testament Book of Deuteronomy.
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God Bless
Michelle~
Aberjhani
Many hugs,
CJ
blessin's and love and (((hugs)))
cynth'ya
Try yelling at it, too.
Boy, these comments (below) are as funny as your poem.
Connie
Ya neva know!
Love,
Susan
Okay, it's just my sense of humor spilling out...loved your poem...could even see the fly buzzing round your head. :)
God Bless
Love, Lena
Susan
thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
William
Taylor
love Tinka
Chuckling here in deep spasms ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Fee
Ochhhh...That's one sore ear..
Peter
Too funny, Karla, but you sure outdid yourself with the presentation here; it clearly shows your creative genius! BRAVA; a very well done poem! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D