Lookin' forward: if forty seven this much fun, forty eight is gonna be G R E A T !!
... having journey'd thru this year my own self, I think I know what I'm talkin' about: forty seven is a hard road, indeed. joints that were once spry s t i f f e n up with age; grey makes unwant'd guest appearances; the health fades along with what mind we had; but I'm here, I'm HERE, livin' and lovin', takin' time to stop and smell the roses, countin' the blessings for havin' surviv'd another year. I'm gonna dance like it's my birthday (even tho it's not), c e l e b r a t e the fact I'm a l i v e !! a verrrrrrry merry unbirthday to me and to you, as well!
(c) 2007, Karla Dorman (3/12)
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Reviews of "A Verrrrrrry Merry Unbirthday (To Me, To You!)"
What a prize you opened up with your un-birthday! Wonderful! It's mid month, the rain is coming, but we can all celebrate this wonderful day with you!
God Bless,
Sharon
RIGHT WITH YOU, DARLIN.... I am DREADING meeting my half century head-on the beginning of May, but, YES!!! Let's be thankful we're still here INSPITE of all the gripes and ills. You've had an AMAZING roller-coaster year, Karla, but your poetry has reaped the whirlwind and brought forth the HARVEST ! Go enjoy the fruits of your passionate labours! I'll drink to that! LOL Kate xx
All I could think of was "Don't count your chickens before they hatch;-)" Thought provoking write and I do know the feeling;-)
Love your dancing attitude, Karla!;-)
Happy un to you to Karla. I looked in the obits today, didn't see my name, so I had breakfast. The greensideup is good. Well, except for those aches and pains.
Rusty
Hello girl!!! don't go bragging on me with your forty-seven, I see you and bet eighty-two!!!
Happy birthday to you, I will be sending you greeting when you reach the hundred one.
Georg
Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
Happy unbirthday to you and your sister!! You certainly have the right attitude, keep smiling!
Hugs, Laura
Well 45 is fine wait till you reach 54...and you will star singing my tune...grrrrrrrr!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!! and to your sister too :-)
I'm hitting the big fifty this May and I feel the same way you do...it's only going to get better :-)
I was thinking the other day......isn't it about time the fashion world does a thing about beauty for the older women, showing the beauty of grey? I've never felt so good.......and everyone wants me to dye my hair.........not likely......I love it :-)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
65 is much the same.
Takes humor to survive it. Thanks for the delightful laugh.
Elizabeth
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
Karla,
Taking it all in stride and grace you have the right attitude for a fianl excellent years... This was joyful and wise.
Every body hates the symptoms of old age such as the stiffening of the joints. But we all like to live longer.
The weaker your joints get, the greater your wisdom.
Happiest of birthday wishes to our two favorites twins on the den. Karla and Karen hope you both celebrate the joyous occasion of another birthday and don't eat too much cake...LOL just kidding fill your boots.
Awww, Karla, this is adorable -- I can't think of a better thing to celebrate, just being alive! I enjoyed your poem very much -- Happy (Un)Birthday to you, too!
Love,
CJ
A humorous look at the world and life through my eyes.
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Laugh at their funny stories, self-inflicted crazy events, strange observations, wacky zoo facts and snippets
A naïve councilman and a down-on-her-luck single mom try to save their county’s last stand of forest from greedy developers and a dysfunctional government.
They tell me it's all a state of mine but what they didn't tell me was which State my mine was in. Many Blessings, My Friend.
God Bless
Michelle~
Be safe,
Karen
YF.....ron
Sage
God Bless,
Sharon
and isn't that really what it is about
thank you so much for this
life's great example
take care
Love your dancing attitude, Karla!;-)
Rusty
A very very unbirthday to youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
Regards
Dai
Happy birthday to you, I will be sending you greeting when you reach the hundred one.
Georg
Hugs, Laura
LOL, You are still a pup, Sweetie!!!
And I am so glad you& your twin are very much alive, too!
HAPPY UN-BIRTHDAY TO YOU...HAPPY UN-BIRTHDAY TO YOU
OH.......IT'S JUST THAT I WANT TO CELEBRATE YOUR LIVES WITH YOU!
LOVE, HUGS, AND LONGEVITY, Granny
Love Tinka
I'm hitting the big fifty this May and I feel the same way you do...it's only going to get better :-)
I was thinking the other day......isn't it about time the fashion world does a thing about beauty for the older women, showing the beauty of grey? I've never felt so good.......and everyone wants me to dye my hair.........not likely......I love it :-)
Takes humor to survive it. Thanks for the delightful laugh.
Elizabeth
Taking it all in stride and grace you have the right attitude for a fianl excellent years... This was joyful and wise.
Blessings & Love & peace,
Josie
The weaker your joints get, the greater your wisdom.
Thank you very much.
ABDULLAHI
Fee
This is adorable; happy unbirthday to you! Have many more; you deserve it! BRAVA~!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D Love ya! You're great! :D
Love,
CJ