Double, Double, Toil and Trouble! (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 20, 2007

Doubles are hard! I've done them in the past ! KEEP ON TRUCKING,, (so they say)....M

Reviewed on March 20, 2007

Felt like this more than I can count to!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on March 20, 2007

Karla, some know what you are writing about...and some not.
It took the platoon traveling in hostile country thirteen hours to cover 45 miles carrying weapons an two wonded brothers.
Taking that them boots off afterwards was a blessing, we let our feet be blowed by the chopper's blades as we were flown back.
We survive then for fight another day.
So will you, with the support of your fellow poets.
Head hight, heart beating...that's my girl!!!!
Georg

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

Oh how grueling, Karla! I know what you mean when you talk about your feet ... sometimes they feel like they belong to someone else! Cute poem and cute photo, too! You're adorable, my friend.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

Ah, the working person. Now there are the real heroes. IMHO
Rusty

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

Wow I remember when I would
Put in 12 or 13 Hrs of work
And standing all day with only 30Minuts of
lunch, Because the schedule person
Did not come in or was late!I feel for You!
Excellent you have expressed the
Tiredness of fallow coworkers
Excellent Message within this write
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning star

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

Ah Karla you express the tiredness that many feel but you do it with such understanding that you inspire.

Fee

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

This is painful- Working Long shifts for survival until your legs are flat. Pay-check-to-pay-chech! This shows your strength. The photo is very cute. It is a very friendly face carrying a brain that is full of wisdom.

Thank you.

Abdullahi

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

You are too cute in image and in poem;-) Good one Karla!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

Thanks for the smile, and thanks for your friendship, you and Karen mean so much to me, thank you for sharing, and thank you for your wonderful words, the pic is great too, btw...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

I see the humor...nice pen

Thanks
Dan

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

I must be thick, I kinda found this sad.....

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

Karla~

This is too, too funny! LOL Thankyewverymuch! *grins* This poem rocks! And so do you! :) Very well done; enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D