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HangAround
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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NOT MY CURRENT STATE. Haven't gotten blotto in years. :)

However, talked to some neighbors that partied a little too hearty...they're feeling it.

Image (c) 2007, Karla Dorman


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... couple of hours old and the New
Year feels like last, with news of
violence, wars and rumors, politricks
as usual ... where is the love
that we're supposed to - will ya shut
ya head, makin all that r a c k e t
ain't doin my head a bit of good.
feels like someone's gone, smacked it -
this hangaround that's hangin' round.

(c) 2008, Karla Dorman (1/1) 

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 Reviews of "HangAround"
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2008
That's a heck of a photo, Karla, and the commentary ain't bad either. I guess we're all hoping that 2008 will be a better time. Meditate on the positive vision. Best wishes.

-=ra=-

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
...the celebration...back to reality...well at least someones feeling something...even if it's a hangover.
John

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 2, 2008
My New Year was so quiet....I had to cheer myself with a Smirnoff-spin!!

Then I got a headache from that and I wished it never happened!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 2, 2008
Karla,

Very quiet New Year. Having the flu, we both fell asleep early. Happy New Year.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
I want whatever it is you are "on", thrice the amount please...e

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
I particularly like the way you put different bits and pieces of reality together. Your poem feels like a very realistic look into someone's thoughts.

Axilea

Reviewed on January 1, 2008
Happy New Year, great write thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
I remember those days and just glad it isn't me anymore. lol

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
happy new year!! mine was very quiet-

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
Happy New Year!!

I'm root'n for the Ga. Dawgs tonight.

Have yourself some fun!

Love,
Susan

Reviewed on January 1, 2008
"Blottoed"...haven't heard THAT one in years! LOL Glad you don't do that anymore; glad you had fun with your neighbor last night! I had fun last night by myself; toasted the new year in with Coke Classic! LOL Should have had the Cajun music playin'! *Grins* Very well penned; brava, Karla!

Bet there are many people who are "feeling it" today! *OW, my head!* LOL


Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
My neighbors had a party last night that lasted until about 4:30 this morning. It was loud, so I was having a little trouble sleeping. I should have just gone over and crashed their party, enjoyed the festivities since I couldn't sleep anyway, but I just stayed in bed tossing and turning. I saw the first light and the first curtain opened about a half hour ago...I am guessing that they, too, are really feeling all that partying that brought in the New Year.
Take care,
Sherry


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