Discovery (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 8, 2008

Can't help but laugh at letting yourself getting talked into riding one of those monsters...

Walt

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

No thank you that picture remidns me of the Drop Zone at Great America I refused to get on that thing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by John Leko

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

...guess that is why places of this nature...are called amusement parks...so those such as yourself...can amuse us with your story.
top spin on this story Karla...
John

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

Your are a brave girl!!

Send us some pics!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

You really are a brave soul Karla...I gave up those wild rides about the sametime I gave up my pony tail...hee, hee

love, Carole~

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

Lol Siblings eh? I love anything like this being a bit of an adrenalin junkie, it's the queuing I can't take.

A Happy New Year to you Both

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

Bad Sister!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

The color brown came, maybe, from those very scared, not exited.
Georg

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Sounds like EXCITEMENT to the n'th degree. Hope you didn't eat before going on the ride.

God bless you and Happy New Year! Kathy

Reviewed by Andrew Grover (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Whew! What a ride! Enjoyed...

Yours,
AJGrover

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Gosh, my soul would've flown away from me forever! Great ride, nonetheless, dear Karla (for you!)

Love,love,love,
Sheri

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Whatever you're getting on ,watch yourself Karla;-)Would hate to see you lose your creativity from a spin;-)...

ET

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Glad you survived..
With love
Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

I would watch from a safe distance...;) ed (hey, did you send the rain up our way again, it just started here)

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Whhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

haha, i was standing under one at brighton pier, the lasses were on a hen night, and guess what they weren't wearing, lol, my g/f pulled me away pdq....:)

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Enjoyed the write...sounds like me and my sister, we went to King's Island one summer and I talked her into riding the King Cobra...I didn't ride, she came off with her ears ringing and her blood pressure through the roof! Each year thereafter when we've gone to amusement parks...she makes sure that we board the rides together...we're not twins, there's two years between us, but we best buddies, think alike, act much alike and yes I have been and still am her tormentor Karen....loved this Karla!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

lol. That sister! What would you do without her? And she chickened out. Oh no. And she's still alive. Lol. Wonderful write. Liz

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Top Spin? Even the two words together defy gravity. Better you than me>
Love and blessings!
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Oh, thank you, Karla! Make ME look like the bad guy! LOL But I alwayas could talk you into riding...too bad I chickened out before said ride went into hyperspeed! LOL Loved watching you come off the ride; you'd always sit down, face extremely pale, eyes jigglin' a mile a minute! LOL Hee HEE! LOL Excellent capture of terror (and much laughter) on the midway! LOL Well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin tormentor, Karen Lynn. :D

Wanna' ride the TopSpin now, hmmmmmmmmmmmm??? *Laughing evilly* LOL