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it's HOT out dere!! (another rant)
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i really don't like it
i don't like it at all
how i am wishing
for the coolness of fall...

it's HOT out dere!!

100 degrees plus
and that is in the shade
melting the ice in
my glass of lemonade...

it's HOT out dere!!

i'm sticky and sweaty
and really feelin' gross
i should stay indoors
to the a/c stay close...

it's HOT out dere!!

naaah--gotta walk to work
gotta walk everywhere
a pain in the ass
in the summertime glare...

it's HOT out dere!!

i take a lot of breaks
just tryin' to stay cool
who am i kiddin'
ain't workin'--i'm no fool...

it's HOT out dere!!

it ain't good for my health
there outta be a law
i should stay inside
sippin' tea with a straw...

it's HOT out dere!!

no relief is in sight
at least through the weekend
i wish fall were here
as temp'ratures ascend...

it's HOT out dere!!

ev'ry year the same thing
i *hate* the summer heat
my way of thinkin'
cooler temps can't be beat!!

it's HOT out dere!!
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as you can tell, i * love * the heat...
NOT!!! summer's baaaacckkk... :)
(with a vengence). someone send
me a little relief...please???

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Reviewed on July 27, 2002
i'm sufferin' right along with you, hun!! i don't like this hot stuff either; but just you wait..winter will hit us in the ass, and you will be saying, "i WISH it would warm up.." (especially on the days when you do the truck at work!). great work, karla!! love you, cheetah head!! love, me.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2002
Oh, dear Karla, IF I could, I would, I
REALLY would, send you some cool weather!!
But...alas...it's growing hot here, too...
You know the old saying--"Spring has sprung,
Fall has fell, Summer's here and it's
hotter than..." well...you remember it,
doncha? Enjoyed the rant--keep on ranting
and writing!! Love to read ya!

Reviewed on July 27, 2002
I just know how it is! We had some very hot and humid days here in Canada a few days ago. It made me just want to sweat and do nothing.

Nice write once again, Karla!!!!! Thanks so much for your wonderful comments to my poems!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on July 27, 2002
hahaha....in December will we be reading
~its cold out there~
great one

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on July 27, 2002
Very Cute

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on July 27, 2002
Karla, Texas is just hot huh? Well ya know, I'm here with ya! I guess we can melt together! Lisa

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on July 26, 2002
Hey, I can't talk...I wrote one called Sweating It Out for the same dang reason.
However, we did cool down this week...only to reheat next week..sigh. Great poem! :)


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