My best friend's aunt bought a Smart car. Littlest thing I've ever seen!
Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman
Energy efficient: can see why. It
takes up no space in the driveway,
doesn't use a lot of gas. After
driving, pack my ride into my bag:
looks lonely sitting in that parking
spot. Most purses bigger than it.
Carry it around until I need it, and
look: matches my eyes! Smart. =]
these little Smart automobiles from Mercedes Benz are very reminiscent of the BMW Isettas, circa 1956 or 1957 -- gas sippers they are -- your poem is a tribute, to those that are, gas resolute -- much love and peace to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael
You said it before I got a chance. Very clever. Why not get two? I'd like one for my fat days and one for the days I can slide in behind the steering wheel without greasing my tummy down with lard first.LOL Fun write, thank you. hugs, J'nia
Cute
Looks Like An eclosed motorbike
a death trap, a coffin with doors
they think more about saving gas
The one's life
Love & peace be with you
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Karla, I love "pack my ride into my bag"! The color is pretty, but I'd be worried a strong gust of wind might blow me away! You're right in your observation that the car seems more like an "accessory" than a vehicle. Enjoyed!
Reviewed by George Ellison (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Good sense of humor here mixed with keen observation!
It's Smart, all right! Europe is full of them, parking by twos in single spots in busy, rushing London. Spent all my early life in VW bugs; I think they're cool. When we pay what the Europeans pay, ($8 a gal) things will change. Remind her to drive defensively, though, and to be aware that a lot of the big lumbering hulks can't see her--especially because they're on their cell phones. ;)
It may be smart...but I think it's dumb.... cute for a toy...but not for the highway or busy city streets...and not smart to get caught in a crash! Squashed like a bug...dead like a bug... Sorry... the only good thing is it's BLUE... blue like your eyes.... hugs, lindalaw
Karla, that car was born in Norway, the land that screams to be the first among everybody defending the climate. Smart was purchased by Ford because in Norway the cost of that car was incredible high, so high that people couldn't afford it, so they purchased a gas-guzzler instead.
I'd feel claustrophobic in that car. That may be a good way to save gas, but I think it's hideous! I wouldn't want one! Still, a good write, and it may be more economical in the long run! Well done, Karla!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
I'd much rather ride in a SlugBug than THAT thing! LOL More room! LOL
Not only the littlest thing I've ever seen. it's the ugliest thing I've ever seen too. I wouldn't be caught dead in that thing. If it came down to driving a car like that ugly I'd get a horse or even a mule first. No way, now how ! Gross !
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Made my comment fly out the window...
Laughing...
Cryssa
peace and love, Carole~
Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose
not quite GEORGE JETSON'S BRIEFCASE - but really cute! tom
With Love,
Cindy
In Christs Love
Michelle~
Looks Like An eclosed motorbike
a death trap, a coffin with doors
they think more about saving gas
The one's life
Love & peace be with you
Actually with the 'Smart' cars, you don't drive them, you mail them lol . . . enjoyed this immensely!!
Hugs,
Lance
didn't fly awy with it. -gene.
I would not advise anyone to buy that car.
Sandie Angel :(
Georg
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
I'd much rather ride in a SlugBug than THAT thing! LOL More room! LOL