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Smart!
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My best friend's aunt bought a Smart car. Littlest thing I've ever seen!

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman


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Energy efficient:  can see why.  It
takes up no space in the driveway,
doesn't use a lot of gas.  After
driving, pack my ride into my bag:
looks lonely sitting in that parking
spot.  Most purses bigger than it.
Carry it around until I need it, and
look:  matches my eyes!  Smart.  =]

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (2/16)


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 Reviews of "Smart!"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 24, 2009
these little Smart automobiles from Mercedes Benz are very reminiscent of the BMW Isettas, circa 1956 or 1957 -- gas sippers they are -- your poem is a tribute, to those that are, gas resolute -- much love and peace to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
ha, ha, ha... Carol's comment is TOO funny! hee, hee, hee...
Made my comment fly out the window...
Laughing...
Cryssa

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
I drove one of these as a child...does this one have pedals?


Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
Should be a great small car to run around town in...cute as a button!
peace and love, Carole~

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
A lot of folks here have those. I wouldn't want to be in an accident while driving one. Could hurt some. thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed on February 17, 2009
Little smart thing poetically expressed in the smartest way possible. When you want to service it you

Reviewed on February 17, 2009
KARLA -

not quite GEORGE JETSON'S BRIEFCASE - but really cute! tom

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
What a cute car!Nice write Karla.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
You said it before I got a chance. Very clever. Why not get two? I'd like one for my fat days and one for the days I can slide in behind the steering wheel without greasing my tummy down with lard first.LOL Fun write, thank you. hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
what a tiny thing!!

Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Cute car, but with all the ppl we take places I will stick with our Mini Van LOL. That is a cute little car though.
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Cute
Looks Like An eclosed motorbike
a death trap, a coffin with doors
they think more about saving gas
The one's life

Love & peace be with you

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Karla, I love "pack my ride into my bag"! The color is pretty, but I'd be worried a strong gust of wind might blow me away! You're right in your observation that the car seems more like an "accessory" than a vehicle. Enjoyed!

Reviewed by George Ellison (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Good sense of humor here mixed with keen observation!

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
So cute

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
It's Smart, all right! Europe is full of them, parking by twos in single spots in busy, rushing London. Spent all my early life in VW bugs; I think they're cool. When we pay what the Europeans pay, ($8 a gal) things will change. Remind her to drive defensively, though, and to be aware that a lot of the big lumbering hulks can't see her--especially because they're on their cell phones. ;)

Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Karla~!

Actually with the 'Smart' cars, you don't drive them, you mail them lol . . . enjoyed this immensely!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Karla, I think it might be ok on the beach--if the gulls
didn't fly awy with it. -gene.

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
It may be smart...but I think it's dumb.... cute for a toy...but not for the highway or busy city streets...and not smart to get caught in a crash! Squashed like a bug...dead like a bug... Sorry... the only good thing is it's BLUE... blue like your eyes.... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
I've often think it's the most unsafe car. Once it gets into a crash by another, the car will roll and roll and roll....like a dice!!!!

I would not advise anyone to buy that car.

Sandie Angel :(

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Karla, that car was born in Norway, the land that screams to be the first among everybody defending the climate. Smart was purchased by Ford because in Norway the cost of that car was incredible high, so high that people couldn't afford it, so they purchased a gas-guzzler instead.

Georg


Reviewed on February 16, 2009
I'd feel claustrophobic in that car. That may be a good way to save gas, but I think it's hideous! I wouldn't want one! Still, a good write, and it may be more economical in the long run! Well done, Karla!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

I'd much rather ride in a SlugBug than THAT thing! LOL More room! LOL

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Not only the littlest thing I've ever seen. it's the ugliest thing I've ever seen too. I wouldn't be caught dead in that thing. If it came down to driving a car like that ugly I'd get a horse or even a mule first. No way, now how ! Gross !


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