Diaphanous (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 1, 2009

Wow!! Karla
You sensuously described nature well
Loved it
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed on February 28, 2009

sensual and delicate perspective of nature's romatic appeal Karla -- I love it -- much peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 27, 2009

Once more you give us a fresh and exciting perspective of Nature's gifts. This is a more sensual approach. Done beautifully. It makes me think of a shy virgin, slipping her nighty off her shoulder. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on February 27, 2009

Delicate poetic vision of flowing verse.

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on February 26, 2009

These beauties do often linger don't they? Masterful and succinct. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 26, 2009

A piece of Heaven!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on February 25, 2009

Oh what a vision of pure delight, fantastic.......

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 25, 2009

visually stimulating imagery ... nice work, Karla ...

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on February 25, 2009

"Diaphanous" is a wonderful word for that picture, and your poem describes it beautifully. Your writings are great, Karla, but I must say you are additionaly talented in photography. Some of the pictures you take are absolutely breath-taking.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on February 25, 2009

VISUAL, both your words, and always the photos!

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on February 25, 2009

A beautiful poem,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

a beautiful write!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

A visonary poem of beauty.....M

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Lovely title: "diaphanous" is a fascinating word.
This is a visual poem, very effective.

Axilea

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Karla,
So well realised and delivered, as Gene says one of your best and I, too, love it.
John

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Karla I love this poem, and the pic is amazing, thank you for sharing both
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Karla, I love the word diaphanous and I love this poem.
One of your best. -gene.

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Good... I love the description....the see thru dress.... cool... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

This is great. Thanks Karla.

Wiht Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Like Georg said, me too neither...e

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Now I will not look an other sunset the same way!

Georg

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Karla~!

So much said in this short poem, yet it empowers the reader to delve into the world of the poet's mind - breathtaking!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

wow Karla, you turn the night into a sensual explosion waiting to happen and arouse your readers with a desire to hear more of this.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Great write, Karla; very well done! Esepecially liked:

"The nipple of sun peeks out
for just a brief moment: it is
enough to ensure your night
will be filled with that vision".

Fantastic!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Well done dear karla. Great images

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

KARLA - SUPERB! Nature being Erotic !

Is it not Human Nature to both Commune with Nature, and to be Naturally HORNY?

:) :) :) TomKat.

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Karla, where were you this morning??? huh? This has got to be one of your best writes to date! Excellent....

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

WOW!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

I wish you wouldn't use big words like this on me. I have enough trouble with the simple ones. ;-) Well done my friend. I like this very much Karla. Cute write. God bless.