Amalgamation (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 4, 2009

ah-we are never quite satified--thank goodness the weather give much fuel for conversation openers--love the write

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on July 3, 2009

Lovely poem Karla, but I still love the heat...
peace, Carole~

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 3, 2009

The photo is great as is your heat tempered words.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on July 3, 2009

Brilliantly done. I love the photo too!

Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on July 3, 2009

I like that word "amalgamation". Makes me think, if you can't beat it, you join it. Sounds like that's what you've done.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 3, 2009

Amalgamation...thank God for my pristine and own intact chops, no man holding a drill or amalgam in sight! LOL

Georg

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

I'm a wimp. I turn on the A/C and stay inside. Now when it's 40, I'll be out in my short sleeves. Patrick

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Excellent Karla! You always spin it just right!;-) The difference here is the low humidity 20% the air is dry,and thank God,I can take it much better. 105 here is like 9o% where you are. Anyway, hope you cool off soon, we are back to the eighties tomorrow;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Christmas in July sounds wonderful to me! Wouldn't it be lovely to have a snow day smack dab in the middle of July? It would be very 'cool' :) Nicely written piece, Karla ~ Hugs, Elizabeth :)

Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Indeed! I could use a little cool air....

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

This is a good way to write about the weather. Karla, you are a genius!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Our personalities do have a habit of merging with the items or topics we enjoy the most and our forte usually comes out strong in poetry.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Karla, your analogy is quite a creative piece my friend -- "merged with the atmosphere. Can't tell where one begins and one ends: sticky with heat" -- I hope you will have a respite from the humidity -- as for cold weather, you may have all of mine --peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Like I told Eileen, temps here in the mid 80's at most & the ocean is a warm 72-75, perfect beach weather...get out your beach chair & c'mon up...Ed & "I don't care how cool it is to dad, I want winter," Rufuz

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Cute Karla.

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Hope it gets cooler Karla. I wish you the best.

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Love this, California is a Sauna too
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

Wonderful write to cool off by in this Texas sauna (sighhh, if only in our minds...LOL)! Very well penned; I felt the chill rising from your pen! Excellent! Love the piccy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 2, 2009

GOOD WRITE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND I HOPED IT HELPED. BLESSINGS. JOYCE.