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The Sky Can't Decide What To Do ...
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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the sky can't decide what to do
and neither can i.  should i rain
and stay in bed all afternoon or
should i rise with the dawning
of the sun?  should i cloud up 
and storm, chasing myself from
here to there or should i ride on
the back of a rainbow and let
things be?  that sounds good.  =]

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (8/11)


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 Reviews of "The Sky Can't Decide What To Do ..."
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 21, 2009
I would chose the rainbow ride everytime Karla -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on August 15, 2009
I think the ride on the rainbow would be the best of all mentioned!...M

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 12, 2009
I vote for the rainbow ride. Patrick

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on August 12, 2009
If only. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed on August 12, 2009
Karla you really have this way of giving personhood to the elements, you make them come alive in your poetry. I vote for the rainbow!

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on August 12, 2009

Ah, if only one could "ride on the back of a rainbow" what a sight we would see beneath us.
Short but very visible.
Mark

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 12, 2009
Can I hitch a ride on the back of that rainbow? Sounds marvelous to me.

Reviewed on August 11, 2009
This is a great poem, thank you for sharing, I enjoyed it a great write
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
I love the mood you create in this, Karla. It's so true how the weather can change the way we feel along with our emotions.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Playful, yet moody, Karla. I like this. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
I loved this one Karla.It made me smile. Nice job!

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Well done Karla, enjoyed this one with the weather being brought to life.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Karla,
Take Kate's advice and go for them all; as Gene says you've spun another beauty, and so well spun. Love it!

John

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
oh yeah... all of 'em... do it allllllllllllllllll! you sound like me: feel like there's so many options you've one foot pinned to the floor and spin round in circles! :)) Hopefully, there's always another day tomorrow and a second bite at the cherry... then a whole tree more! Choices, choices... and they all sound gooooooooooooooood! Busy brain at least keeps us from getting bored... Neat write! :)) xx

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
You've spun another beauty, Karla. Riding tht rainbow
sounds good to me too. -gene.

Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Nicely done, Karla. It shines all by itself.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
THE AWESOME CHANGES IN THE HEAVENS CERTAINLY MAKES A GREAT INSPIRATION....DOESN'T IT? WELL WRITTEN WITH WONDERFUL IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Ride the rainbow, Karla. You never know what might be found.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Yes it does dear Karla - good indeed!
And your words aptly convey your faith.
Wonderful!
Blessings and pixie dust ...

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
I think the ride on the rainbow would be infinately more fun! Great job on this one Karla...I really enjoyed it!

Anna

Reviewed on August 11, 2009
I pick the ride on the rainbow
Great write as always
Have a great day
The Buzzard

Reviewed on August 11, 2009
LOL So you have become like the weather in Texas: can't make up it's mind! LOL Too cute; well done, Stormy!! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin (and reluctant chase partner), Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Eventually, no matter the fickle sky, you will do what you always have done, watch and report.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Some times the sky becomes like a little puppy dog going around and around chasing its own tail!

Georg


Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Cute, Karla.


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