Aww, Mommmmm!! (with video link) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 6, 2009

haha, this is great Karla -- mother nature will have her way, period -- those are ominous looking clouds in your photograph, really angry -- no amount of pillows or blankets can muffle the boom of thunder -- even if you can't hear it, you still feel it with your body -- peace and love my friend --Jon Michael

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on August 23, 2009

it is disappointing to be waken from a good dream Karla, but nightmares it is a good thing, nice down to earth, cheers

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron

Reviewed on August 23, 2009

Thanks for sharing, Karla. Rain in the a.m. is perfect time to sleep--but thunder can definitely get your attention and get you up--especially in TX! hugs...

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on August 23, 2009

I wish I had the experience but I have nothing to compare this to. It is a nice piece though, and humorous too. Thank you for sharing sis.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie.

Reviewed by Michael Guy

Reviewed on August 23, 2009

Yup when "old mom" roars I too like to get out of bed. Your bio says: "porchchaser" Some people might think you're always on the lookout for a good nap but I know what you mean and now that I have a "real cheap" digital camera" (wal-mart) I know the allure! But nobody does porchchases better'n U!
stay safe, mike

Reviewed by Kate Clifford

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

Are you saying your mom roars like thunder? LOL. Love this write.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

Dear old Bill is angry and he is on his way, we keep tracking him on the computer, should hit Halifax by 3 pm tomorrow. Thank you for sharing Karla.

Newfie hugs are on the way, Rose

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

:~) Your personification made me smile.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

L O L. . .albeit while shivering slightly. Always want to crawl
u n d e r the bed when Nature is working up to a frog-strangler complete with thunder and zags of lightning. Ayeeeeiiiiiiii.
Signed, Greatbig Wuss {who luvzyoo HEAPS}

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

That's quite a storm, and a clever written accompanyment. Patrick

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

been having some storms too, enjoyed.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

To me it was drums, cymbals, and everything one can bang on it to disturb a decent morning sleep in. Somebody up there hate pillows!

Georg

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

GOOD WRITE AND THE VIDEO WAS GOOD ALSO. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

fantastic picture and creative write!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Good one, and they do seem to have personalities of their own.

fee

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Very cute Karla, thank you for sharing
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

lol...this is sooo cute Karla!!!

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

This was a wonderful write, now a days it's the darn phone that gets me up
It just keeps ringing till I get up and answer it LOL
Then again it doesn't care if I roll my eyes :)
Have a great day
The Buzzard

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

I loved this Karla. I think many of us can relate. Sometimes that bed looks SO good!

With Love,
Cindy

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Love the rolling eyes. Well done.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

You have captured the storm image so wonderfully. Your brother abdi-noor

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

The way you tell it, Karla, I think most of us have been there.
The universal response, as I recall, was: "Just 5 minutes more."
-gene.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

very good way to discribe this. I'm glad I'm south of that. LadyJ

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

lol. We could use some of that. Well said. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Sounds like a good Mom. ;-)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Gotta watch the rolling of those eyes, that'll get ya in trouble every time.

Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

It seems all Moms are much the same in this respect. Nicely done, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Adorable poem, even though that sky wasn't! Man alive! SCARY sky!! Well done, Karla; loved the humor in this! Enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (sleepy) reluctant chase partner and twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Glad I missed the ugly sky! LOL

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Wonder where I've heard that before? You didn't know my ma, did you? love it.

Cheers,
Dan