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19 Degrees of Separation
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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19 degrees in Burleson (should be BRRleson), TX.

Going to be warm, compared to Thursday and Friday, with forecasted highs in the low to mid 20s and lows around 13 degrees.

Blood turns to ice at that thought. Wouldn't think I was a Yankee, once ... LOL!

Image (c) 2009, Karla Dorman (1/5)


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... the sun struggles to heat up
the crystal blue plate of sky.
The ground protests my weight
upon its broken back with loud
crunching sounds.  The breath

stalls in my nose, not wanting
to get out in the frigid morning
temperatures.  Don't blame it.
Didn't want to, either.  Would
rather be in, where it's warm ...

(c) 2009, Karla Dorman (1/5)


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 Reviews of "19 Degrees of Separation"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 7, 2010
Karla, cold weather never befriended me either -- it has been quite cold here in Delaware also -- mid to low thirties for daytime highs, about ten to fifteen degrees colder than the norm -- I am vacationing if Florida later this winter -- can't wait to get out of the frigid clime for while -- it is the global warming I guess? -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 6, 2010
I can hear the cracking protest of the ice against the cold!

Georg


Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 6, 2010
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Karla,
I really enjoyed your descriptions in the first part. The second part made me laugh. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
19 degrees wots dat in Celsius. We are snowed in for the first time in 30 years.
Never realised Texas got cold, you gotta find a hunk so he can chop you firewood.

Crunching snow, frost, ice is a delightful sound. Top poetry...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Love the way you captured this one... especially the idea of giving human life characteristics to the earth and to breathe...well done indeed.
fee

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Actually I do live where it's warm...in Los Angeles. And it's like summer here. The weather is gorgeous. But, I grew up in NY. Know the cold all too well. Glad I left. Love this line right here: "The ground protests my weight upon its broken back with loud crunching sounds."

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
awe-sounds almost as cold as here! well written

Reviewed on January 5, 2010
I am going to stick with these Cali tempsr ight now, love the write though
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
You cold? ;-) (lol) Great write, Karla.

Reviewed by Carol Grace
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Great, great word picture. I have three words--dress in layers--three more syllables--stay inside.

Good job,
Carol

Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Cute write, Karla; stay warm!! (And then there's me: "Bring it ON!" LOL) Well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your winter-lovin' twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Mid 20's sounds like Beach Weather to this Yankee! Can I send you some 20 Below??!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Five o'clock this morning as I was walking my mutt in twenty-something degree weather I had a thought. Do I really need a dog? Twenty-something degree weather in the deep south will make you stop and wonder about things such as that. Good wordplay here . . .

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Wow! That picture looks mighty cold and your wonderful descriptions confirm it. I love the first stanza: cyrstal blue plate of sky, ground protests, crunching sounds. Nice pen, Karla.

Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
Reviewed on January 5, 2010
Loved this Karla!

With Love,
Cindy


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