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Two Years Now
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Two years now, Daddy, without
you here.  How I miss you, now
more than ever.  Put up a tree,
but it's not the same --- missing
something.  The ornaments,
the lights don't glitter like they
used to.  They blur in a wash of
tears.  Christmas just doesn't
feel like Christmas --- it's just
another day.  No cards, no
letters, no phone calls --- no
laughter.  That's what I miss the
most.  All I have to unwrap are
memories and sadness.  I wish
Santa could bring you back to
me --- that would be my greatest
Christmas present ever.  Merry
Christmas, Daddy --- tell Jesus
'Happy Birthday' for me ...

Love, your little girl,

Karla.

(c) 2010, Karla Dorman (12/16)


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 Reviews of "Two Years Now"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
I am so sorry Karla, that kind of a loss is difficult to endure especially when it is so recent as two short years. Your faith will help you endure and keeping your dad in your memory shall never die.
Love
Amor

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on December 21, 2010
I am so sorry, Karla.

As for the poem, it says worlds about you and your dad. Such a

wonderful tribute! Poignant and down-to-earth and sweet.

He was so lucky to have you. (No, IS. And he loves the poem. Other

angels may be a wee-tad tired of hearing him brag. Keeps reading it

aloud and shouting, "My Karla wrote this!!"

But then, everyone loves you.

Christmas and New Year Blessings from me, Ray, & Nicky the Wonder Dawg

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Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on December 21, 2010
Oh Karla hon, I am very sure he is there with you. This is a wonderful tribute that melts the heart. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((((((((((((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL CHRISTMAS HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))))))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed on December 20, 2010
KARLA - I

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on December 20, 2010
Sorry for your loss, very painful for you and to a lesser degree me as a reader,because i feel a part of your pain through this,,,sad ,when you have a loss such as this at this Holiday time...thanks for sharing..

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on December 18, 2010
Beautiful poem, I know how you feel, take care and merry christmas

Reviewed on December 17, 2010
Karla I know you miss ur Daddy, I miss Nonna too and its been seven years and counting, well done as always
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on December 17, 2010
This stands out, Karla, it is so genuine and so beautifully bridges the realms of heaven and earth.
Blessings to you,
Christine

Reviewed by Donna Chandler
Reviewed on December 17, 2010
A sad and touching write. Sometimes just putting our pain into words is helpful.

Donna

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 16, 2010
Karla dear, your Dad is looking down from the most wonderful place, surrounded by love and peace. He wants you to unwrap those special MEMORIES those important times and give thanks to God above for giving you the opportunity of making them. Dress your tree and watch your Dad smile through each light as they glitter. I turn the lights on my tree and I see my Mom and I hear her beautiful voice as she sang her favorite Christmas Carols. Have a wonderful Christmas and know He is with you always.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2010
poignant and touching. all i want is another version of rudolph the red nosed reindeer my daughter lost two years ago.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 16, 2010
A great sentimental write from Daddy's girl, Karla. Well done.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on December 16, 2010
i know that feeling, still missing my father who died in 1972. He was the greated man and loved living, but died before his time too.
Missing people is natural around the Christmas Season but we have reasons to go on celebrating as they would wish us to I am with you all the way and hope you have a Veery Happy Christmas.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 16, 2010
my heart, too is sad-well said here

Reviewed on December 16, 2010
Karla, this poem made me cry!! Seems that the holidays, holidays like Christmas, are the hardest to endure without mom and daddy being here ... well done; powerfully penned sadness!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( tears!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 16, 2010
Granted he's gone and you are most depressed with his loss, but you have so many great memories of the great times, that could keep you happier...e

Reviewed on December 16, 2010
Karla,

I know losing your Dad was very rough on you and Karen. But I'm sure your father would want you to be happy. Even though you miss him, he's still in your heart. He can never really die. Peace and love to you. Merry Christmas. Mary


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