twinkletoes* (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on April 11, 2003

he he he...

Reviewed by Jacqueline VanZandbeek (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

Well now, what great humour you have. Glad you can laugh at yourself. Keep laughing, it is the only way through this life we have been given. Great job on this write. I had a good laugh. Be careful and watch out for the buses.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on March 24, 2003

this was an enjoyable read, and a wonderful outlook on life.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

i needed to smile ;)

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

Karla, being a person who is so graceful I can trip over the painted line on a basketball court, I know where you're coming from. That's why I never even considered naming my daughter GRACE. Love the poem, my cane is purple, what color is yours?

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

Love the way you turned it all around and used it for a write to make the reader smile and understand, too. Now...that takes real talent and heart!!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

Be careful now.
Funny how we look around to see
if anyone seen us fall?
Oh yes, I have tripped before...

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

chuckle

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

OH my, this made me smile so! Watch out for those buses though! lovely sweet poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

Excellent...I really like this one Karla ...very vivid images and a great style.
Love from one Twinkle toes to another
Chrissie xx

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

Oh Twinkle toes this is excellent. Very vivid .Imagry. Peg

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

This is cool, Karla.
I like this style and you gave a vivid picture of using a cane. Bravo.
~E

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

i know how you feel. i am not exactly miss graceful myself! you know that just as well as i do! :) funny write about a not so funny situation! that's what i like about you! no, LOVE about you...you can laugh at yourself; and you have taught me to do the same! thanks! :) ((((HUGS)))) and love, your (graceful) twin, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2003

hee hee this was so insanely twisted humor for its picking on you but in a funny way awesome job on this [poem