pms (caution--strong language) REPOST, revised (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2003

Karla, this is so true. It makes me think of my younger daughter - we always thin that she should go away to the hills! ;0)

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

Karla, this is great, I adore it. It's a prequel to my poem Hot Topics, the one about manopause. Great Job!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

excellent work!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

lol! but don't forget the poor man that has to try to sooth you ;)

Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

this was super hilarious nice job on this fantstic ppoem

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

he he he..It's worse with the full moon...

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

Many (((HUGS))) Karla and I thinks men still haven't got a clue as to the likes of PMS...think they ALL need to come and read this post! ;O)
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

I'll hurry and go get the pills

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

ouch
really hate that part
well done you texas twin

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

**running away**

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

HA HA!!! You know I can relate. Excellent write. Awful shame is that it's true!!!!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

Ha! This was great! loved every word..

Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by a- maryllis

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

"know my pressure's gone through the roof
i'm gonna bark i'm gonna woof
growl like a dog hiss like a cat
y'all don't wanna SEE me like that" <--- LOL Love that

Karla, if you don't tell anyone you're pmsing... here's a secret... they might not know! :) Good write

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

just call her Karla hyde;-)LOL..couldn't resist, after what you said on mine;-);-)great descriptive write

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

folks..BELIEVE you me, you DON'T wanna' be around karla when she is pms'ing! it is NOT PRETTY! it's akin to being in the middle of a battlefield 'cuz you DON'T know when the moab is gonna' hit! YIKES!! :0 i live with her, and I KNOW to keep my mouth shut when she is like this! powerful, angry, emotional rant; i am sorry you suffer from pms so badly! i wish i could help you feel better when you are in one of your *moods*! good write, sweetie! (((HUGS))) and love, your (cautious) twin, karen lynn. :(