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dont be gittin the big head (humorous rant, CAJUN style!)
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what make you so special, you t'ink you all dat,
head git much bigger, won't fit unner you hat,
you put you pants da same way dat i do,
listen: dere ain't no diffrent 'tweens me 'n' you,

jus cuz you gots the money dat i ain't got,
what make you t'ink dat you is all fire hot,
lease i earns mine honest, weren't given to me,
honey, t'ings can always change, i garontee,

just cuz you gots a bigger house, car, 'n' boat,
don't give you no reason to set dere 'n' gloat,
be nice to have nice t'ings, but you never know,
you could lose it all in flood or tornado,

lemme remind you who put you where you are,
it's doze little folks who made you dat big star,
so don't be gittin' da big head, you'se been warned,
you fo'git us...you'se gonna be da one dat's scorned!
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ever wanna tell one of doze celebrities
off? just cuz dey t'ink dey better den
all of us...dey wuz once where we's at
now.

am i right or am i right?????


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 Reviews of "dont be gittin the big head (humorous rant, CAJUN style!)"
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
My dear Karla, I laughed all the way threw this. It was sure funny honey. daz de truth deari. Dayz no better dan us'es. Do's Iz havz its. lovenhugs Grady

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Great rant!!
Jenni

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Tee-hee ... this is great Karla!

~Joseph

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
Great thoughts! You DA Woman.

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
karla,
This is great! I love it.
Love
~Chrissie xx

Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
:-D :-D Karla :-D :-D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
U R RIGHT!!!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2003
(((Karla)))
Karla g/f oh yea you got that right...this is a SUPERDUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPEEALIDOCIOUS rant of truth!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
Clapping.....Clapping Hurray !!! Oh this was sugar,spice and true to life love to shake your hand on this one glad I stopped in and read it more applause for you !!!!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
one of the problems with america is that it worships the personality but forgets where it's came from...

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
Really, really good, Karla. And so, so right. Well couched in the dialect.
Write on!
Leland

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
Nice! you are so right, and you said it wit such style, gurly. ;) Keep it real G. ;)
Cheers,
~Kari Anne~

Reviewed on June 8, 2003
Ha! You are right karla, This was great, I loved it!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
Way to tell 'em...this was so cute and fun!

Reviewed on June 8, 2003
Karla, this is wonderful...still grinnin'

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
This was very cute, Karla!


tony

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
You go girlfriend this is an excellent rant.
Peg {{lkove ya}}

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
You is a scream karla.
Bigger hat people you talken bout here?
You friend Ron

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
you iz right honey! Karla you are a
corker;-)Well done!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
fun write! When we come to the pearly gate money won't mean a thing.

Reviewed by David Alexander, Sr. (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
EXCELLENT KARLA (Lil Sis), great poem and characterization. Only thing is, I don't believe you and I are the same, ifn we are, Iz gonna sue some one of them sawbones for telling me Iz a boy or we gonna sue one 'em for lettin us think youz a gurl.. lol..
God Bless Lil Sis...Poppa aka David

Reviewed on June 8, 2003
You are right! And I love the way you say it!!! You go girl...stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed on June 8, 2003
that's tellin' em, karla! a wonderful rant, there are so many of those big stars who forget about their fans once fame comes to them; wish they could realize that they could lose it in an instant; they won't stay famous forever! fame is fleeting....oh, if some of these celebs could live on what WE do; that would definitely open their eyes! (((HUGS))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
That's tellin' em like it is!


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