i want one now (the hummer song--sung to the slinky song) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 8, 2003

LOL This was to funny!
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on July 5, 2003

HILARIOUS!!! What else can I say...LOL!!

Vesna

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 3, 2003

This was great, I loved it,

Reindeer

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2003

Beautiful dear!
NOW COME CELEBRATE AMERICA'S INDEPENDENCE DAY WITH ME.
Bill ........ hugssssssssssssssssss

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 3, 2003

Melikes!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2003

Love the poem Karla, but would rather have a Mercedes!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on July 3, 2003

wow...Karla...loved this write of urs...BHUWAN

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

cute write! ugly car...

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

My wife wants one too.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

Being an Aissie I think I am missing out on all the info I need 'bout this item the hummer...but it sounds happy so I want one too.
Best wishes
from
kay

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

Silly silly Karla,
I love this humor of yours...

Love & Hugs
Trixie

Reviewed by Donna Maris

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

0oh migod karla - you are touched... hummers are overpriced jeeps baby! buy a jeep and make everyone - including yourself happy.=)
what's up with the duck yellow color anyway?
QQ Donna

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

**laughing** Kewl dream!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

LOLOL!!!!

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

This is hilarious. I'll have the slinky song in my head all night!!!
Great write, Karla and have a happy 4th.
Jill

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

This is so fun! Hummers are bummers to look at on the outside, but on the inside??? wow...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

Cute write and fun read, Karla! Enjoyed this!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

Cute write!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

Love this one Karla. I enjoyed it!
Love
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

oh, this is absolutely ADORABLE! thanks...now, because of YOU, i will be singing that song for DAYS! hysterically funny write; wish you could have a hummer....but noooo...too FREAKIN' expensive, waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay out of our price range! :( ((((HUGS)))) and love, your twin, karen lynn. :) HUMMER HAMMER right back atcha, and NO TAGBACKS! so THERE! NYAAHHHHH!!! :P LOL

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

Hehe.
Enjoyed this one.
Love
Nico

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)

Reviewed on July 2, 2003

Its a hummer all right...
ha ha
cute
Mister