the haircut from...you know where *partly fiction* (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2003

Oh Karla this is so humorous, except when it happens to me! Great write.

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2003

Ooh, my face has been red a time or two as well.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on August 4, 2003

LOL...loved this write..Way to go!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 4, 2003

I am laughing here...this brings back a few memories..excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Linda Murray

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

A lovely whimsical piece. My granddaughter just cut her's too. But mom got the weedwacker away from her just in time. LOL

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

hehehe know what this is all about...being a hairdresser for 21 years......lol!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

Jeez this brings back memories, all three of my kids "trimed" their own hair once. It only took once to convince them they shouldn't do that again.

Wonderful, cheery and charming.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

This is very cute, Karla. I'm good for a doityourselfer now and again, but I always have to go get it straightened out.
Leland

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

When You Look In Mirror Cut To The Right!

TRASK

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

On the bright side, it will grow back.

Nancy

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

Karla, I'm laughing so hard it hurts...LOL this was so hilarious. I must confess when I was five I took a razor to my waist length hair, got my bottom spanked and my hair cut soooooo short I cried for days. Great write! ~Z~

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

Fabulous and funny poem,cheered me right up,
I cut my own hair always to save money but then hairdressing was my early profession so I'm allowed , I had a few ladies come in asking for help after ruining their own hair in attempts at home hair cuts (not with a weedwacker anyway)naughty them and naughty you!
Next time ask Paw or anyone to do the cutting or better still pay my fare over and I'll do it for you.(Pleaaaazzzzzee).
You make me laugh sometimes and I like that,thanks.
Best wishes
from
kay.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

Good grief, karla.. I am hanging off my chair by a thread, laughing like mad! Not only is the poem itself written with perfect rhyme and meter, but your use of the "twang" language is absolutely perfect! I swear, without it, it would have been a whole different piece.. you clever, hilarious, delightful woman! I'm STILL giggling! God, I love this! Great work! hehehe love, katy xox.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

this is absolutely hiLARious, karla; what a funny write! LOL enjoyed~! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :)