i said i wasn't going to complain
*about texas heat*
i wish we would get some nice, cooling rain
*that would be SWEET*
the temp'rature is now one hundred four
*it's almost three*
we could tie our record, just a bit more
*four more degrees*
a front is close, but there's no real relief
*wind's from the north*
it's not helping--it's visit will be brief
***autumn, come forth***
i think i am living in the wrong state
*too late, i fear*
the heat makes me CRAZY...edgy...irate
***git me outta here***
(c) karla dorman, 2003
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okay, i lied when i said i wouldn't complain!
the heat makes me a bear...grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
update: 5:00 p.m., cdt--106 degrees *that's too HOT*
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Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2003
too hot!
I could feel the heat steaming from your poem. Good rhyme and rhythn
Man, I can't stand that kind of heat!!!! And you love Texas????? Hmmmmmm I should talk, here in Lompoc, we've had a crappy summer, wind blows all the time and it's been cold and overcast mostly..... I can't stand this kind of weather either..... sigh... when will I ever be happy.. smiles... great write, sis.... stay strong... oh, I heard that if you take a hot shower, it helps...
In Spirit,
Bear
TOO HOT FOR ME!! YIKES!! i hate the heat, too...COME ON, FALL!!!!! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your (hot and bothered) twink, karen lynn. :( *THANK GOD FOR AIR CONDITIONING*
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I could feel the heat steaming from your poem. Good rhyme and rhythn
~Jackie~
Stay cool.
PJ
Gina
In Spirit,
Bear
not quite that hot. Turn up the AC!!