i don't know WHERE this one came from,
but i loved the images that came to
mind! enjoy--
stretching his short stubby arms shaking sparks out of his hair he awakens tosses aside the storm colored sheets throws his legs over the side of the cloud and rises to his full (little bolt) height
his daddy greets him with a smile electricity shining in his teeth how's my little man the little bolt says awww daddy i wanna grow up and be big like you 'cause you're the brightest light around
ruffling back tendrils of light his daddy says get ready for school today's your final have you studied hard like a good boy that's how you'll pass the test that's how you'll learn to fly
yessir the little bolt told his daddy i've studied really really really hard more than i ever have i want to fly across the sky i really really really do i'm just afraid i'm not big or brave enough
son we've all had doubts like that believe in yourself and you'll do fine i believe in you what more do you need you've studied you've answered all of the practice questions you've performed your exercises well
i was afraid when i took my final the little bolt's daddy told him reeaaaallly and for true yes son but because my daddy believed in me and all i needed to do was believe in me i passed you better get going you'll be late
when the day shifted into late afternoon little bolt was seen zipping through the clouds look daddy i passed teacher said i was the best flier around she said i was the quickest and brightest see i knew i could do it hey daddy watch me
and father and son played a game of tag in the clouds
Cute, excellent, as always write, Karla. I think that it came from you, inside you is a little lightening bolt ready for its first flight, Peace, Ed & rufuz
DAMN, girl...the imagery and playfulness of this "energetic" write are absolutely incredible! What a charming, playful, delightful poem!
"stretching his short stubby arms
shaking sparks out of his hair
he awakens
tosses aside the storm colored sheets
throws his legs over the side of the bed
and rises to his full (little bolt) height..."
"his daddy greets him with a smile
electricity shining in his teeth
how's my little man
the little bolt says awww, daddy
i wanna grow up and be big like you
'cause you're the brightest light around"
so did enjoy this; thank you for sharing! BRAVA!! your creative genius is growing by the day, and it is amazing with what you have managed to come up with! this is a sure fire winner for sure!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D
Deputy Dave Jenkins sets out to find the murderer of the local high school principal, aided by a voice from the grave that is sometimes helpful and sometimes misleading.
"Murder isn't usually this funny."
Amazon reviewer
This is WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am so so so so so so IMPRESSED!!!!!!!!
BRAVO!!!
Love Tinka
Well written....
Your friend Ron...
Nancy
It's Respect, Admiration You Daddy & Mommy Instill In Him!
Thanks Your Comments!
TRASK
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
great imagery
am happy you and Karen liked my "voluptuousness"
William
DAMN, girl...the imagery and playfulness of this "energetic" write are absolutely incredible! What a charming, playful, delightful poem!
"stretching his short stubby arms
shaking sparks out of his hair
he awakens
tosses aside the storm colored sheets
throws his legs over the side of the bed
and rises to his full (little bolt) height..."
"his daddy greets him with a smile
electricity shining in his teeth
how's my little man
the little bolt says awww, daddy
i wanna grow up and be big like you
'cause you're the brightest light around"
so did enjoy this; thank you for sharing! BRAVA!! your creative genius is growing by the day, and it is amazing with what you have managed to come up with! this is a sure fire winner for sure!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D