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flying lessons (for kate) CONTEST
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i don't know WHERE this one came from,
but i loved the images that came to
mind! enjoy--


stretching his short stubby arms
shaking sparks out of his hair
he awakens
tosses aside the storm colored sheets
throws his legs over the side of the cloud
and rises to his full (little bolt) height

his daddy greets him with a smile
electricity shining in his teeth
how's my little man
the little bolt says awww daddy
i wanna grow up and be big like you
'cause you're the brightest light around

ruffling back tendrils of light
his daddy says get ready for school
today's your final
have you studied hard like a good boy
that's how you'll pass the test
that's how you'll learn to fly

yessir the little bolt told his daddy
i've studied really really really hard
more than i ever have
i want to fly across the sky
i really really really do
i'm just afraid i'm not big or brave enough

son we've all had doubts like that
believe in yourself and you'll do fine
i believe in you
what more do you need you've studied
you've answered all of the practice questions
you've performed your exercises well

i was afraid when i took my final
the little bolt's daddy told him
reeaaaallly and for true
yes son but because my daddy believed in me
and all i needed to do was believe in me
i passed you better get going you'll be late

when the day shifted into late afternoon
little bolt was seen zipping through the clouds
look daddy i passed
teacher said i was the best flier around
she said i was the quickest and brightest
see i knew i could do it hey daddy watch me

and father and son played a game of tag in the clouds

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "flying lessons (for kate) CONTEST"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 14, 2004
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am so so so so so so IMPRESSED!!!!!!!!
BRAVO!!!

Reviewed on January 14, 2004
An excellent and creative write. Enjoyed!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
Cute, excellent, as always write, Karla. I think that it came from you, inside you is a little lightening bolt ready for its first flight, Peace, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
Woderful creative write Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
I believe in you too, karla
Well written....
Your friend Ron...

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
Oh, I love this tale of lightning bolts filled with lights of wisdom, Karla. Wonderful! ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
I enjoyed the imagery in this Karla.

Nancy

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
Only Fools Never Make Mistakes,i.e. If Son Does Not Believe In Himself Even Daddy's Lightening Bolts Cannot Help Him_

It's Respect, Admiration You Daddy & Mommy Instill In Him!
Thanks Your Comments!

TRASK

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
This is absolutely delightful! Love the imagination you showed with the descriptions, and the lesson weaving all the way through it. GREAT WRITE!!

Reviewed on January 13, 2004
Wonderful write indeed, Karla! I enjoyed this.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
Delightful write, Karla. Enjoyed this!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 13, 2004
an enjoyable write ... Karla
great imagery
am happy you and Karen liked my "voluptuousness"

William

Reviewed on January 13, 2004
(((Karla)))

DAMN, girl...the imagery and playfulness of this "energetic" write are absolutely incredible! What a charming, playful, delightful poem!

"stretching his short stubby arms
shaking sparks out of his hair
he awakens
tosses aside the storm colored sheets
throws his legs over the side of the bed
and rises to his full (little bolt) height..."

"his daddy greets him with a smile
electricity shining in his teeth
how's my little man
the little bolt says awww, daddy
i wanna grow up and be big like you
'cause you're the brightest light around"

so did enjoy this; thank you for sharing! BRAVA!! your creative genius is growing by the day, and it is amazing with what you have managed to come up with! this is a sure fire winner for sure!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D


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