Ignore my mouth
my lips that bleed
afraid to stop
afraid to turn this around
it's still not right
still not black
I cannot be without this
I'm not myself
without your crush
it's not what I'd imagined
breathing without your air
it's really nothing now
just pain, no glamour
I break the lego-made world
tear it all apart
throw the blocks away
I knew the day would come
I gave it all up for you
I hope you understand
I bleed, and all for you
And I know the time will come
my heart is slowly breaking
and I hope you understand
I break with you in mind
I slam into the concrete
for you.
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Reviews of "For You"
Reviewed by Timothy Foley (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2002
Ther isn't much for me to say, to say I feel a part of this poem would be selfish, who am I to say this is me? We all break April...we all fall down...but you've got the chance to pick up and do better with your life. Know that, and know that even now, after everything, I love you April, I do.
Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2002
most of us can't apply the brakes before slamming into the concrete...it is the only way we know how ride...**Mari**
A page-turning novel about a relationship between best friends that is interrupted because of betrayal , deceit, sexual promiscuity and pregnancy happens!
A page-turning novel about a relationship between best friends that is interrupted because of betrayal , deceit, sexual promiscuity and pregnancy happens!
good write though. depression, recession, succession, suppression? or all of the above. steve
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Sandie Angel :o)
powerful...
Janet
Michael Bauer (author - in case I continue to come up as Chris (visitor)