An Earthen Cry (poem) by Amber V Moonstone on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on May 3, 2012

will it ever return? dreamers cannot help but hope it will. beautiful poem that touches the soul.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on April 26, 2012

A cry worthy poem *Amber V*
with your chosen words to heed!!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on April 26, 2012

Very enjoyable poem, Amber

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2012

Amber, Yes,we can, but will we?

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

I like these lines: "churning my thoughts/of pleasure bound memories/into real life melodies." And "Man and beast were joined in joy." is full of jubilance; those words are beautiful. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

I often dream of the time when man and nature were in balance. As you point out in this poem, it was a time of abundance, too.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

The cadence of the drum, be it an Native war drum, the British snare drum or the Thompson drum always seems to stir a fire in the hearts of men. Well done amber.
fee

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

The harmony and peace to go forth. Beautiful thoughts in heart
and mind Amber. Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

Where has this harmony gone? A profound question--one we must answer with action for Mother Earth

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

Let us honor earth every day, let us all see and feel what she brings to us that has been provided through Universal love for us. Lovely tribute Thank you
Love and Light

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

your fourth stanza:
"The harmony among all creatures
was something that was natural
and not questioned.
Mand and beast were joined in joy."

is a splendid ideal, Amber, and my hope is we
can return to that sort of Eden but something
tells me it'll be too difficult for us
to undo all the damage we've caused - i hope i'm wrong.
This is fine work indeed.

john

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

Where has this harmony gone?
Can we ever get it back?

I'm sadly beginning to doubt that more and more, unless many, many more actually soon start to care.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

It is often hard to go back in time, you would have to get the world to agree and give it the time it needs. Great write Amber.

Rose

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

Truly a moving and very meaningful write Amber written so amazingly as always and beautiful photo indeed Laura

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

I can hear your character Karena saying this...An Earthen Cry is timely...Tom Toms covered with new hide to summons all...be well, Amber.

s

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

Ah, Amber, the world isn't being destroyed, no I think not. I really don't believe man as hard as we may try will be able to destroy this planet. You think differently, and I understand that and have no problem with it.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on April 24, 2012

Amber,
very well penned would that people will listen and hear.
Budd

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 23, 2012

nature's drum beats in the heart your words ... inspired and beautifully written, Amber ...