Dawn, this is fantastic. The vision you portray is to me more than the coming of a winters scape, but filled with the depth of longing, overflowing with empathy at the demise of creation both inwardly and outwardly. I am glad I had the chance to stop by and read this superb piece...I'll be back.
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Allen
Well penned Dawn!!
Love Tinka
superly descriptive poetry! i really like how you've ended it ...
the reader is left shivering at the chilliness of the descriptions--very powerfully imaged and written
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
exqusite piece of poetry!
They pick at peeling bark, ruthlessly squeeze
last vestiges of green from barren tree.
Wonderful verses, quite meaningful and deeply touching
Reindeer
You have such great choice of words. I like how you used them in this poem.
Sandie May Angel :o)